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Wonderful, wonderful chapter!! Keep up the great work!!

HEY! Finally got computer back and what a suprise to come back to! I have just INDULGEG catching up on last 6, or 7? chaps... no dishs, no cleaning, no dinners LOL thats what takeouts for! They have been so incredible! And of course just gotta love the little lisp for sixth....grins And to bring one of the founders now that was unexpected but soooo cool! Now the question (For me anyway) is what becomes of Sirius.....everyone else see's reason but...this is suspensful! (Is that even a word?) hahahahah Im so glad to get back to watch it all unfold...running to kitchen to back huge cajun sheet cake......just for you'se.....

so knowwe have harry and sev from the first time line i guess their older selves and the new time line with another set so there will be 3 sev and3 harry's two a couple how cool i s ove this stroy thank you for it we also have three may two fiction of other creature the older and the younger which is real good because there two remus in two dobby's maybe another dobby if he is with the grandfather i ll i can say is your good

amazing work as usual :) what does the note mean ? " five months prior. between the maner. silver and black " please update again soon i cant wait to read more

Great chapter! Evil cliff hanger of doom. :( Now I really can hardly wait for the next chapter!! Keep up the good work!!

Still not a slash fan, but bloody hell you have me hooked on this story! And that's the biggest compliment I can pay you :)

Your characters are well developed and your plot intriguing. I can't wait to find out what happens. It would be great if you're gonna do a comparison of the ppl Harry left in his time line to how they turned out in the new one where they are changing things.

Just gotta say that from what I've read in previous chapters, both Sirius and James seem a bit too dopey and unwilling to look at Dumbledore's motives and in a way dismissive of those who aren't pureblood. For example the way they react to Remus working for Prince Conglomerate and listen to Dumbledore over their friend. Also the way they dismissed Lily and her wanting to believe the book and the fact that she could claim a gringotts vault.

Another thought just occurred to me. Molly's brothers don't seem to be enamoured of Bumbledork, they aren't alive in the original time line... suggests to me they saw through the old coot and he helped them to be dead.

Keep up the great work, loving your twisted little mind and what it can create. You're making my twisted little mind look for hidden meanings in things. Sweet :)

Thanks for updating. Really good chapters. I read the last 3 at the same time. Just love how the story is progressing..They are going to have a lot of work cut out for them with all of the babies...I wonder if they will be able to save the Longbottoms?

Cool, two wonderful chapters!! with Neville being born later than Harry, does that change who the prophecy is about? Or will it be up to Voldemort to choose who he marks as his equal? Anxiously awaiting the next installment of this great piece of writing. Keep up the wonderful work!!

awasome chapters ! im glad u are feeling better and i cant wait to read the next update i wonder what harry is having ? i hope even has a sister :) and will sev ever carry a child ? well keep up the good work my dear i cant wait to read what happens next :)

Yay, another great chapter!! I forgot to tell you in my last post that I'm glad that you are feeling better. Keep up the great writing of this wonderful story!!