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Another wonderful chapter...can't wait to see Older Harry interact with his parents. That would be so emotional. They're getting ready for battle, I hope you don't decide to kill anyone off. Also can't wait for Bumbledork's reaction to their fighting and how they will spin the media so dorky doesn't take credit. So love this story, keep going strong. I'm starting to post my stuff, and yup it is fun :)

What can I say, I just love each and every chapter!!!

Ooh, what wonderful chapters that you have gifted us, your grateful readers! Will the working of the family crest into the basement of the Potter's house change history? Will Voldemort still be able to attack and kill the Potter parents? Inquiring minds want to know!! Keep up the wonderfully stupendous writing!

Great chapter, evil cliffie!! One has to wonder if Dumbledore or one of his flunkies could have gotten a hold of Molly's book without her knowledge or is she in on the plan to portkey Becca to where ever Salazar ended up at. Awaiting the next chapter with baited breath!! Keep up the good work!

Who took Salazar? My bet is on Dumbledore having something to do with his disappearance. Yet another wonderful chapter. Things are starting to come to a head. I really can't wait to find out where you're going with this. Despite my slash dislike, still one of the very best stories I've ever read. Keep on writing this fabulous epic. :)
Jen

hehehehe Dumbledork is losing it. I hope they get rid of him as much as they want to get rid of Mouldyshorts. Once again another fantastic chapter! I got to read 2 chapters in one night, wonderful. I knew Dumbledork was behind that portkey, I was also thinking that Molly was unaware it was a portkey. Those mirrors have come in very useful, great way to keep track of the old coot :)

Teddy was adorable, the toddler speak you created for him was very realistic (having spent several hours today trying to decipher it myself). And sixth born...aawwwww so cute. Loved Lucius' reaction to finding out he had a horcrux in his possession. I would need a stiff drink too :) Your Lucius is a much lighter one than in the books. He seems less dark, which makes sense since he was influenced by Mouldyshorts for a shorter period of time. They are definitely changing the future for the better.

More please?

Something I forgot to say before. You are one of three authors, whose stories have given me the guts to post my own meagre offerings to the Harry Potter fandom. So Thankyou :) I hope right now your feeling both really embarrassed and flattered.

Only Dumbledore could accidentally capture Salazar Slytherin and have no clue as to who he is.

You're doing great at keeping all the different time lines individual and identifiable. Not an easy task to do - I tried it in one of mine on another site and failed spectacularly! More sex or kink, PLEASE! I'm just an erotica junky at heart! HP/SS are among my fav combos! In general, I like the pace of the story.

Wow! that last line, how cryptic. I cant wait to find out what that means.