rate_review Reviews

That's one Dork Lord down (hopefully)

So i finally caught up in reading the story and wanted to wait till i read the latest chapter to review (It took me almost two weeks to read)...and I LOVE IT!! I like time traveling stories and i have never read one so complex, but you handled it very well and payed attention to details. i have yet to see any contradictions in your story and if something radically changes you explain it well. Great job, and i cant wait to read more!!

More...more...more... I'm addicted to this story, and I want more!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please update chapter 88 soon ^_^

Jan

YEAHHHHHH! two villians slain with one action! Well, hmmm more than one if you really try to count up all the twists and turns our fav. little snakes have done BUT now they have got the worst one! Now comes the most satisfing part PUNISHMENT! oh may he fry! and several other very...satifying lingering actions...rubbbing hands together with evil laughter cackling about....and why did a Becca/alternitve line send note to golem the Potters? hmmmm me thinks more twists and turns are abounding coming in! Oh just cookies and brownies wont do for these last few chappies...going to go whip up a HUGE "better than sex" choco cake.......and a good shot of Kalua too! winks...k

Let me just say I know I haven't reviewed the last few chapters, but I doesn't mean I didn't like them. I love all of the chapters...I am so glad that the Potters were saved. This chapter was suspenseful. I really enjoyed it and the fact that the Potters has survived is just icing on the cake. I look forward to reading about how they will prevent Dumbledore from getting to the Potters vault, and I wonder what will happen to Sirius. I also love the idea you had about a spy being a snake. That was just brilliant! So much originality! You are an amazing writer!

What brilliant chaps, this is one of the first stories on AFF that I read and it is still one of my favourites. You should be so proud of yourself. :)

Wonderful,excellent chapter! Yay, Dumbledore is going to BURN!! Keep up the great writing! I can hardly contain myself with wanting to read the next chapter.

Um WOW! WOW WOW WOW Can't you tell I liked the last 2 chapters :) Didn't see James and Lily not being dead coming, I hope they recover. Loved how they got to Harry and how they were all really grumpy leading up to the final attack. And the Death Eaters being delivered to the ministry in a box lol funny.

Dumbledork finally got some of what was coming to him. I bet he had a hand in Sirius being arrested and why was Sirius gonna be sent to Azkaban without a proper trial? Becca as Petunia was hilarious. And poor Lucius having to clean out the lestranges house of dead Death Eaters.

What I hope you do in your next few chapters is have the reactions of unknowing people to Dumbledore's treachery, Sirius out of custody and finding out about Dumbledore, The longbottoms coming out of hiding, some sort of questioning of Molly Weasley regarding her screeched comments at the hearing. (These are the loose ends I'd really like to know the answer to.)

Still worshiping at the feet of your tremendous talent. I love this story, and for someone who is not particularly a slash fan, that is the highest praise I can offer you. Keep it up!

Goodbye Dumbles! HA!!!