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for The Third Time is a Charm

by ladyedgecombe

person "Wishdragon
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this story please write more. I want to know what is going to happen.
person sanda
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chapters
person Anon
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to tell you I've been reading your story and think it's totally awesome!
person dominque1
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love it i hope that everything works out i also hope that they are able to remove the blocks on harry when he's a baby and i would like to know if baby harry will merge with big harry good job
person llyoung
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. I'm really enjoying reading it. And since you said it was also on another site, I went looking and found it and now get to read up to chapter 18. Thanks for mentioning that more chapters were up elsewhere.
person sanda
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chapters, have a whole chocolate cake for your hard work, or any other kind of cake that you want.
schedule September 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I love it! Read it through without stopping, or without reviewing each chapter, because it was just that good! I can't wait for Chapter 13!
person Hotaru
schedule September 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please don't stop writing any time soon. The plot line is amazing and the extra details are juicy! Love the story so far, and I can't wait to read the next chapters.
person ajgordon
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo! Royal colurs that's interesting. And a blue orb...? Good story so far, I can't wait to read more.

Cheers, MeToo
person Makovaso
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, please update soon.