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Loved the idea of the story, but it has become way too much with way too many venues, ideas and paths to follow.

If you ever get back to the original description and/or thought of the story, let me know.

wonderful i cant wait till you update again !!!!

Hi, I am really enjoying your story and I am not usually that into time travel stories. Well done and thanks.

So far a very interesting story... I love Severus being so protective of Harry. I have to admit I didn't like in the begining the dark Albus, and maybe I could say that you went a little too far, but as the timeline is supposed to dissapear I guess there is a possibility out there in other realms for all alternatives, this is just one. Keep on going, I lov ethe way you write. I have just q question, they are going to another timeline where there is no Harry, or there is a baby Harry, but Severus is a grown up already, how are they going to handle both of them living in the same timeline? Eventually both of them are going to end in Hogwarts and meet? I am very curious as to how you are going to "arrange" that...

exelent story, I give you another chocolate cake with an edible picture of Severus and Harry kissing on top, bye

I'm so glad I found this story! I love it! Keep going!

Hi, I am really enjoying your story, I can't wait for the next chap. Thanks

ilove the fac that harry has little snakes but i still want to know how the merge together when harry is older are if the will start another line because harry has seven children and litle harry will have seven children their will beto set of harrys and sev's are will they merge together when their older are will they just become grandparenst to themselves but either way i love it

This is actually very good. I've noticed that occasionally, you forget to close off the quotations when someone speaks. It can be distracting, but a quick read through will fix it right up! And other than surface errors, this is a very well-written story.

Becca is a strong female character, but because of the situation, she doesn't seem too powerful. And since she isn't part of the main pairing, I don't see a problem with her at all. Snape is rather out-of-character, but considering the revelation he had with Harry, it's quite understandable; I'm glad he can still be a snarky git when he needs to be.

I am impatiently waiting for more.

Death.

I love the seven little snakelings.