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October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cliff hanger! please update soon !!!!!
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October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ArGGG! Did you have to leave a cliff hanger! I really enjoyed this chapter. Your ideas for this story has obviously been well-thought out and I cannnot wait for the next chapter. Well-done.
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October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it ! i cant wait to read the next chapter and then ill give you triple chocolate chip cookies! this time :). they have a chocolate frosting and 2 kinds of chocolate chips dark and milk and even white chocolate.
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October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it cant wait till the next chapter !
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October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I actually had to login and leave a review. This is one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. It is well thought out, complex, has fabulous character development and makes allowances for time paradox. You are a truly gifted story teller and I will be watching this story for updates. I couldn't stop reading until the last chapter.
The only thing I notice is that you keep mentioning Harry and Severus's soulmate status a little often. It does get very repetitive and we've known since the first chapter. So now that Becca can't go back to her time will she hook up with Regulus? I'm interested to know how they'll circumvent Dumbledore though with his multitude of tracking and monitoring devices for Harry and will we get a peek into the other timeline to see what eventually happens?
The only thing I notice is that you keep mentioning Harry and Severus's soulmate status a little often. It does get very repetitive and we've known since the first chapter. So now that Becca can't go back to her time will she hook up with Regulus? I'm interested to know how they'll circumvent Dumbledore though with his multitude of tracking and monitoring devices for Harry and will we get a peek into the other timeline to see what eventually happens?
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October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I see that the team is slowly coming together. Will things continue to smolder between Reg and Becca and eventually heat up?
Good chapter!
Good chapter!
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October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great chapter :) i cant wait to see what happens next!!!! i think Becca secret is she loves Regulus? or maybe remus ?....
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October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If I havent reviewed this story yet then I need to be hit. I cant remember if I did or not. Your story is amazing. very well thought out, nicely paced, everything really helps the story along. The chapters aren't to short its not like your posting anything just to post and get reviews. I wish I had your skill I really do. It is really one of the BEST fics I've read in a long time. PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ finish it. I dont care if it takes years just dont drop it.
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October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As usual a great chap. Now if you are taking bribes, I'll send you some sugar quills if you bring my Ice Prince Lucius Malfoy (swoon)to the side of light......please! LOL.
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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LIKE IT!
More please!
More please!