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for The Third Time is a Charm

by ladyedgecombe

person nari-chan
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wonderful work as usual :). i cant wait to read the next chapter please keep up the good work and never give up ok you are too good of a writer to stop .
person Kim
schedule November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OHHHH! Finally got to catch up! Look at what I had missed with computer out....sniffs...but these last 3 (4?) chapters more than made up for the withdrawals I was going thru! I love the creation story for the wizarding world, and the whole concept for the reasoning and how to deal with squib children! Gives a whole new slant on magical power and effects of dna breeding and of course the letting it lay to gain thought..I have raised several crops and livestock...did you do FFA or something? grins

My mind immediately went to line breeding on some parts there...many a "Best of Breed" ribbon gotten that way but also on occasion failures as well.....and poor stuck up Lucius! LOL he hates the thought of having to lower his nose down to the every day merlin-blo society level...I really thought the new time line Severus woulda been more of problem to convince than Malfoy! snickers...

New strands of thought each time...sections not previously considered in all the fan fics I've read before. If you ever decide to publish a book? I wanna pre-purchase it NOW! grins
Knocking on wood this "Puter" holds......cant wait to see the next chap and next new twist! :-0)

Setting down extra plates of double fudgy goodies baked while whining about missing you guys....I done ate enough of them! LOL Kim
person Sly
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love your story ... it's amazing
because of this i wanted to ask for your permission to translate this story into german. Of course there would be a link to this page and i would clearly state that it is your story and that i'm only the translator. I would really appreciate it if you would answer me on this one so that i could get started should your answer be positive.

Apart from that i can only say that you have to keep writing and that i would like to have wednesday to read the next chapter.
person kaasan
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Alas the end of another wonderful chapter. Will Snape and Malfoy accept the truth of what Severus, Harry and Salazar has said or will they need to be obliviated and sent on their way? I will be waiting as patiently as I can manage for the next chapter of this great work of fanfiction. Keep up the great work!
person kaasan
schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I really like the way that Malfoy and Snape reacted to the Seven. I just hope that their fear of the snakes will not hinder the alliance between them and the Princes. Great history lesson, I can hardly wait for more!! Keep up the great writing!
person nari-chan
schedule November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice work i cant wait to read the next chapter :)
person kaasan
schedule November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Will Lucius and Severus be able to learn occulumency quickly enough to be able to hide their meeting with the Princes from Voldemort? The mini floo having the ability to transport the Seven around using parseltongue passwords is ingenious. Keep up the great story line and I can hardly wait for the next installment of this most excellent fic.
person nari-chan
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow i love Salazar . amazing work as usual cant wait till u update next :)
person kaasan
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! I had to laugh when Severus woke up Remus and Regulus with the water spell, that was great! A great introduction of the portraits as well. Harry really surprised Salazar with his parseltongue and his having a basilisk as a familiar. How long will the four of the guys have to be in the time displacement rooms for their training? Waiting patiently for the next installment of this great fic!!
person nari-chan
schedule November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ha snape and malfoy think they are going crazy i love it! lol
well wonderful work as usual cant wait for the update :)