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I love this story keep up the good work

Hello,
Just to tell you that this story plot is good,but Severus is out-of-character Harry seems to be too weak and well it wasnt the kind of story that i wanted to read but its good just this story is too simple-minded im sorry if you take this as an insult but i thought that i wouldnt be capable of seeing the end of this story but i can and,just like a movie,a movie that you can guess the end its no good in my opinion but,the story plot in general is good but you can see these kind of stories everywhere,but good work...

NOW this is even better meal than the plate of Thanksgiving goodies! I love how you incorporated "The Seven" into a prophacy! I guess partially because I've always been drawn to snakes....(shame mmy hubby wont let me have any! Marriage: compramises, compramises)LOL

And I never woulda thought I would have liked Madame Wallburga! She is really growing on me......
And you slash scene is even better than a big batch of the finest chocolate....I will re-iterate...any type of book you ever decide to write? I want on the list to be one of the first buyers! Dont matter what genre...I want on your list! grins

You made my holiday...now I can go onto the Pumpkin pie now.....gathering a plate ful of goodies for you.....

There ya go! No one has thought about the women being the answer! LOL And when you think about it who else can be as fierce or determined? And I LOVE how Madame Black kept Lucius in his place....she would be a hard one to stand against......Now how to make Sirius sit long enough to listen? hmmmm I can already picture you have already figured out how to deal with him! grins.....I am always so excited to open a new chappie from you.....I am never dissapointed! You are a amazing writer!
Sitting down Grandma's chocolate creme merange pie for my fav authoress!
(At least I didnt do her chco mine meat one! ) Shudders....we will stick with chocolate if thats ok!
LOL

I love this story

Excellent chapter my dear. Voldemort won't know what hit him when the ladies get involved with the movement to get rid of him and Dumbledore. Lady Black is a force to be reckoned with, as is Lady Malfoy. I don't envy Lucius when she gets upset about her children. He is just so stubborn, I hope that she can help him to see the light... pun intended. Can hardly wait until Wednesday for the next chapter! I was also glad to hear that you are posting a tamer version on fanfiction.net for those who like the story but not the Snarry goodness. Keep up the great writing!!

i like the ladies and how narsissa can make malfoy shut up lol
well good work and cant wait till u update :)

First of all, this review isn't a flame. I personally hate reading slash stories, they just aren't that interesting to me. This story however has such a well thought out story line and well developed characters that I HAVE to make an exception. Your ideas are great and you have obviously thought it out at least a little before writing it down.

Just make sure you finish the story... it's worth it. You're a talented writer and I've enjoyed reading what you have so far, despite my aversion to slash fics. I hope you take that as praise and not criticism. Keep up the good work.

Now that I've spent the last several hours reading your whole epic thus far I need a walk.

:D

Another wonderful chapter! I really like the lullaby that Becca sang at the end of the chapter, it was so sweet. Can hardly wait for the next installment of this great work.

OHHHH another perfect chapter! I KNEW Malfoy was gonna be a hard butt about something, now I cant help but think if whoever fixes the girls was another species? snickers.....THAT would wake up Mr Snob! LOL And the last bit was touching....getting Reg's mom there with both her son and niece....I cant wait to see what Harry is gonna say about Becka's singing.....winks....she seems a natural with babies....LOL
Sitting down big plate of fudge bars for your muse....(This one will be a Thanksgiving choco something...hmmmm) :-0)

If I have trouble with puter and cant holler before hand have a wonderful THANKSGIVING!