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Ohhh I love the time chamber! I brings a whole new slant on so many levels! And being pushed that hard on subjects? Im not suprised they had a spat, shaking head.....Snape is lucky it wasnt worse! grins.....and Malfoy is now on the line it seems to get the info whats his face wants.....not good! ROFL

And dont worry i'll keep checking for ya,(Bet all the others would as well!) I dont know about you but sometimes every day life just likes to step on me toes! Setting down some fudgy no bake cookies......Big hugs, Kim

Nothing is on tv but this story is good make sure tell regs mom so she doesn't freak.

This is a very complex and involved novel you're writing! And I love it!

I'm sorry I did not review on this site anymore but I found your story on FF.net and I review there, usualy a few chapters inthe same day. my id name for FF.net is lady sakura cosmos.

as usual amazing work, the ladies are going to be interesting to get to know and know more in detail as the story goes on . i love the head strong lady black and lady malfoy. And the saying " while the man are away the ladies will play." fit perfectly lol well cant wait till the next update

Lovely story.... very nicely written. You have some great talent there man!

Awesome story! : D

I liked how you had Peter in the story. I agree on how you wrote the chracters I mean harry is human he is going to wimp a little he has had a lot thrown at him in a short period of time keep up the writing and mainly have fun :<)

the chapter was as great as always ... i think that lady black is not to out of character. The screaming that welcomed Becca when she portkeyed into the entrance hall instead of the sitting room was a very in character like walburga. But i'm curious why becca let not kill her the rat... or would it change too many of their plans? or make the future too unpredictable?
However i think that she would have interrogated becca more, especially after the resetting of the wards. But all in all a great chapter. i'm curious about the trainig the men will do, so i hope we will get to read something about that in the next chapter.

Greetings,
Sly

Great chapter! I really like the way that Seventh Born found Peter. What was he really doing there? Was he spying on Lady Black for Voldemort, and why? He will have fun trying to return to Voldemort from the middle of the Forest of Dean without a wand to help him. The meeting between the ladies went very well. I thought that it was great the way that Becca surprised Lady Black with the reason for Seventh Born's name and the revelation of the Seven being snakes.
Waiting as patiently as I can manage for the next chapter of this wonderful story. Keep up the great writing!!