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for The Third Time is a Charm

by ladyedgecombe

person Jennifer
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the idea behind this story and I am (not-so-patiently)awaiting the next chapter.
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awsome chapters i really do enjoy reading this story sometimes i just don't have time to review or my mind is stuck on school work and problems. Well i wanted to tell you that i keep reading and am enjoying the story. It started snowing here in Ohio today where it stuck around for a few hours before melting. well soon the snow will be piling up. hehe. i love the snow but i end up sick for a few days which sucks. then walking in snow awsome. well i'm off to sleep i have school work to do a lovely essay that i have no clue what i'm writing about and studing for my japanese written final. i had the oral today and i did horrible! i couldn't remember anything *sweat drops* oh and ya on top of the oral exam i had an oral presentation for spanish and we were so totally not prepared for the presentation we had to talk for 16-20 mintues and we were a group of 4. today was not my day oh well now must sleep i'm rambling from the lack of sleep. hehe. well oyasuminasai. (good night japanese).
person kaasan
schedule December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters! The women are certainly becoming a force to e reckoned with. I really like the way that Lady Black has that take charge attitude and has agreed to help Becca with the Death Eater wives. Being able to find and retrieve the children that were taken from their families has gone a long way in convincing the ladies that Becca and the Princes are only trying to everyone that they can.
schedule December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far. Very edgy, good character development. I wonder what it'll take to get Sirius more grown up and away from Dumbledore's robe.
person Nefari
schedule December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am just enjoying this story. It's just different from anything else I've read. You add a whole lot of originality...I look forward to every chapter. Keep up the good work.
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice. And the women are rallying!
person judy
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It is cold as heck here but,this story warms my heart I love it write more soon.
person tamikolee
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, so great to see Australia mentioned, we are one of the oldest continents in the world, it makes sense that we would have a lot of magic just oozing from the ground. Our earliest inhabitants would learn to harness and use that magic, I am glad that the Aust. MOM recognises this ancient magic. Great chap, thanks :)
person nari-chan
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great job as usual my dear . i might have to make double chocolate chip cupcakes soon ;p
person sanda
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chapter