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for The Third Time is a Charm

by ladyedgecombe

person kaasan
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, well worth the wait! Wow, thirty-two masters between the five of them. That is really impressive!! Ugh, I really hate Dumbledore, what an ass. He just has to stick his crooked nose into everything doesn't he. Okay, now there are two Remus' too. This can get really confusing if you don't pay close attention to who is doing what, but I am glad that the Lupins made it to where and when Harry and Severus is. Keep up the great work and I am waiting patiently for the next chapter!!
person kaasan
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Now I am really getting curious as to who the leak is. I mean first Regulus and Sensei, and now Severus and Harry are followed by death eaters. The nerve of the bad guys to send that booby-trapped trunk to the daughter of the Minister just to smoke out Harry and Severus. I'm glad that they were able to save her and still be able to keep their presence a secret. The testing of Harry's elemental powers by the Aborigine, in the village, was great. That was really cool the way that the King Brown Snake could feel Harry's magic and know that he was the one of prophecy. I can hardly wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great writing!!
person Kim
schedule December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoah! What a trip! Turning yourself back to warn yourselves then being the distraction....ugghhh talk about meeting yourself in the middle!
(Or something simular! grins) I bet the feeling of college graduates is simular to what our boys are feeling....LOL
Now the question is...is the suprise guest at the party..is it a time turned huest? One we have had just a peek at in the beginning? Or no....Doesnt matter..gonna go back and re-read anyway! ROFL
Also just love the intro to the King brown...(I adore snakes) and have always watched every documetiary on the "barrier Reef" when possible..it is a wondrous place!
It is sooo cool how you bring in so many new, interesting things to this story without it getting off the track or to distracted....I still would bet good money on any book you should decide to write...it would be a VERY good investment! Setting out extra plates of mixed cookies and fudge...everything is better with FUDGE!
person nari-chan
schedule December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
sorry i haven't reviewed in a while . but have to say amazing work please update soon so we can find out what happens next :)
person tamikolee
schedule December 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, loved the Aussie (Australia) bit, thanks. Great chap :D.
person kaasan
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! That trans-Atlantic flight is a bitch, the jet lag is a real pain in the ass. I can't help but wonder who the traitor is that knew Regulus and Sensei were going to be at the American Ministry of Magic of his Mastery exams. Is this going to interfere with the plans to rid the world of Voldemort and Dumbledore? I can hardly wait to find out. Keep up the excellent work!
person kaasan
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Boy that Rowles gets on my nerves, he is so nosy. And that Ravenclaw that took the applications for Severus and Remus, what an airhead for a Ravenclaw. I can't help but wonder what What's-His-Face is going to say about Severus taking so many Mastery exams at once. I'm counting down the hours until Friday so that I can read the next installment of this wonderful story. Keep up the good work!!
person Judy
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
In 55 I liked your comment on the womens involvement good point . Now on to 56 I like how Snape was starting to have hope and also how you worked in Remus and Snape having time together. What were bot mens masterys ? Keep up the good writing and have some virtual wasile Judy
person kim
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY got to catch up on last 2 chapters and am pleased to see one of the old adages being used..."If you want something don right have a woman manage it!"
(Or something like that) grins

And oh how cool to see how brilliant these guys are.....not only wizards but witchs too will chase after our sexy, rich, SMART hunks....possibly even muggles as well but all to no avail....ROFL

I cant help but see several possibilities for couples here....and of course my dirty mind has slid way down to the gutter with it! (At least until you give a tidbit or hint....) pouting, begging? hahahahahahaha

setting down HUGE platter of double decker fudgy brownies to bribe your muse......winks
person Tanya
schedule December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying reading this :D