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for Harry\'s Menagerie

by knj4k4

person Alarya
schedule April 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved these oneshots, loved them all ! Especially the last one,I think it was the most intriguing as well as the most "storylike" I mean, it is the one I would see developped as a multi chapters story the most.
The one with Neville was very cute, the one with Firenze very creative and weird in a good way, the one with Hagrid strange but original =) Of course, the one with Percy was original and creative one :) At last, they were all hot in some strange way x)
schedule October 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gelding means that a horse has been gelded.
To be gelded means to be neutered, or to have their balls chopped off...
Means that they have no sexual drive :D
Great otherwise
person Anon
schedule December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to comment on the use of the term 'gelding' in the third chapter. Geldings are male equines that have been castrated. Unless Harry lacks functioning testicles, he's not a gelding.
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was hilarious and well-written all at once. The menagerie concept was totally new, over the tope and great! Can't wait to see what else comes up in this story! Keep up the excellent work!
person Lunicorn
schedule December 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey - no disrespect, but I have to pass along to you that Geldings are young male horses that have had their bits altered, if you catch my drift. Stallions are breeding males, those not worth breeding are gelded as it makes them a lot easier to handle. I just wouldn't want anything... untoward happening to Harry. Happy writing. :)
person berkie88
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
'fae frquently abondon their young to be raised as a wizard' so Neville's parents didn't know he was a fae? Was the glamour in plac already by then? I'm assuming the rest of his family at least didn't know though... Or they wouldn't compare him to his 'father' or force lagic from him so often.

I assume Dumbledore and Remus know he's a fae? Dumbledore would be powerful enough right? And Remus is a werewolf...
This story actually needs a sequel... :-P
Now I'll go read the next chapters!
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
more sexy detail please
person Selene89
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you said "poked boyfriend" I'll lost the last chap you sent me soz. could you resend it please. I'm sorry I haven't been proofreading your story but uni calls and I must answer. *sigh* This story is good though