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MayorHagger, I realize this is a bit of a time-consuming suggestion, but how about copying what you have written from your laptop to your PC - and by "copying", I mean retyping on your PC as you read it off your laptop. I only say this because I've had a few hardware issues myself sometimes(usually with me, it's just writing and forgetting to save for a while and then - oops! power outage, cursing, screaming, trying to rewrite from memory when the power comes back on - and I really like this story and would like to see you continue. The romance is well done, the smut is very good, I love the characterization and it's a refreshing change of pace to see a non-Harry/Ginny story where there's no Ginny-bashing.

please update soon

Story: great! Amount of story: bad! Want more!

While I would really, really, really enjoy you turning this into a H/Hr/ParP story. It is not required, only strongly encouraged. If not, you could possibly put a spin on Hermione liking Parvati instead of Harry and just being disappointed at their relationship. She could possibly find comfort in the arms of Parvati's sister, Padma. It would be a little hard to get them together, but it would be worth it to have a side relationship to this story that wasn't exactly traditional. Any mentions of forced sex/rape in this story will immediately burn my mind(and interest in this story) to a crisp. Please don't do that to us. I do agree with you that the whole canon pairing of Ron/Hermione is pretty stupid. They have nothing in common, and those that say that they argue like an old married couple, conveniently forget to add the phrase 'before they get a divorce' to the end. A verbally abusive or physically abusive relationship never works out well for at least one of them. Also convenient, Harry and Hermione discover feelings for the 2 youngest Weasleys just after the books mention that their mother used a love potion on their father. Then the whole thing was glossed over and the whole 'sudden attraction' they had to the redheads in HBP was brought out of left field. Oh well, hope the story works out well for you, later.

A very good update. Glad to see you're continuing this excellent story. WHile HP/PrP has never been a favorite of mine you do tell the story exceptionally well.

<3 I loved this. An unconventional pairing for sure, but oh so sweet! =^^=

Keep up the great work!

Awesome -- I love the interactions with Hermione, and hope that goes further ;)

Not to mention that he won't be rescuing moRon from the lake this time.

Actually, I think I prefer a little smut with my plot. Either way, I'm enjoying this story and I look forward to more. :)

Update soon! :)

Poor Hermione! Ah yes, the curse of smart unpretty girls everywhere. Do everything for a guy and he doesnt think you're dating material, but happily preserves you for his jerk of a best friend.

Hermione is too good for Harry. Perhaps when she's happily involved with a nice guy of her own (the word 'nice' excludes Ron, you understand) Harry will realize what he let slip away... and it'll be too late.

Please don't let this become a threesome fic. Just because Hermione has plenty of practice being a third wheel (her friendship with Harry and Ron - the boys never pick her side over each other) doesnt mean she likes or deserves further practice.

The best Harry/Pavarti story out there! I really hope you continue to write more chapters. It's refreshing to read a story with well written plot and erotic smut. Too often you get either one or the other in fanfictions. Keep up the great work!