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January 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hermione/Ron?
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July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dear Mayor Haggar,
We are holding your daughter. If you ever want to see her again, you will update this fic asap.
PS. Don't even think about calling those @$$holes Guy and Cody.
We are holding your daughter. If you ever want to see her again, you will update this fic asap.
PS. Don't even think about calling those @$$holes Guy and Cody.
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June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
beautiful story. i cant wait to read the next chapter.
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February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww! Poor Hermione! This chapter is really hard on her!
On the one hand, It's a bit sad that this chapter doesn't advance the overall plot at all, on the other hand the changed point of view is a really good idea and I think gives the fic an added bit of depth. I think the writing of the prose has improved a bit from the first set of chapters. So good work all around.
The only minor quibble I have, is really a bit more of a missed opportunity. Having the trio explain all their adventures to Parvati 'off screen' as it were. Especially about Sirius. Them having to explain that no Sirius wasn't trying to kill Harry last year and was trying to kill Ron's rat, could have been a fun scene.
Looking forward to more.
On the one hand, It's a bit sad that this chapter doesn't advance the overall plot at all, on the other hand the changed point of view is a really good idea and I think gives the fic an added bit of depth. I think the writing of the prose has improved a bit from the first set of chapters. So good work all around.
The only minor quibble I have, is really a bit more of a missed opportunity. Having the trio explain all their adventures to Parvati 'off screen' as it were. Especially about Sirius. Them having to explain that no Sirius wasn't trying to kill Harry last year and was trying to kill Ron's rat, could have been a fun scene.
Looking forward to more.
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February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just read the first two chapters. I like the way the plot integrates into the Goblet of Fire storyline. The romance is sweet, and I like that Harry doesn't know what he's doing. The porn star sex and feats of stamina make me giggle a bit, but fanfiction smut is nothing if it's not fantasy fulfillment. I like nice!Lavender. It's good to see acknowledgment that many 14 year olds do have sex. I do think Hermione is a bit overly shrill and smug, but overall, it's a nice little fic.
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February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was great! My first Harry/Pavarti and I'm almost mad jkr didn't give them a chance haha well done(:
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February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. I like the original pairing. Not so keen on Ron's protrayal or the possible Harry/Hermione stuff but I do like Parvarti. It will interesting to see the results if she's taken instead of Ron for the second task; is Harry going to be eager to hang around and play the hero if Parvati is on the line?
Side note: it would be nice if Harry 'returned the favour' for all those bjs, he seems to have been entirely on the receiving end thus far.
Side note: it would be nice if Harry 'returned the favour' for all those bjs, he seems to have been entirely on the receiving end thus far.
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January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, and I get the feeling that Hermione just got an eyefull.
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December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great 3rd chapter. I like how you're showing that sex doesn't rule their lives now that they've done the horizontal mombo. While I hope and pray that the direction turns into a H/P/Hr love triangle, I'm not holding my breath nor am I asking for confirmation of that pairing. I just don't think Ron deserves Hermione. He's a right prat who needs his bloody mouth superglued to his arsehole so he isn't constantly defying physics by spewing all that shite. Looking forward to the next chapter. Later.
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December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, Hermione joining in after the task? Win!