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August 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! Great character development and storyline so far! please please continue it! Gutted I can't read more right now :(
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February 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
poor Hermione...
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February 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
overjoyed that you've changed your opinion on Ron :)
and really enjoyed the focus on Lavender's bum ;)
and really enjoyed the focus on Lavender's bum ;)
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February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
probably the most overlooked pairing :)
so much potential!
so much potential!
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January 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
okay what happened to the formatting for the first 4 chaps becomming one long running paragraph?
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January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
good start, ron does have a point hermoine does boss them around, and now she being nicer to harry but not to ron that would hurt, he going to be heartbroken when he find out hermoine like harry. i like ron and hermione together.
since you making it ooc anyway, can ron have some fun if harry getting a few girl ron should at least get couple.
since you making it ooc anyway, can ron have some fun if harry getting a few girl ron should at least get couple.
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January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter was fine... but then... you said you want to do something original???
...and the first thing you do is to take the Ron-character and make him a typical Fanon/stupid sidekick???... and Hermione the typical star-stuck girl???
"they seem so wrong for each other..."... This is called unresolved sexual tension... They only need a good fuck!!!
"Ron was decidedly jealous that Harry had gotten himself a girlfriend"... very OOC!!!... as Ron was sooooo jealous when Harry kissed Cho... totally coherent... LoL
"Ron had a hot temper
...and the first thing you do is to take the Ron-character and make him a typical Fanon/stupid sidekick???... and Hermione the typical star-stuck girl???
"they seem so wrong for each other..."... This is called unresolved sexual tension... They only need a good fuck!!!
"Ron was decidedly jealous that Harry had gotten himself a girlfriend"... very OOC!!!... as Ron was sooooo jealous when Harry kissed Cho... totally coherent... LoL
"Ron had a hot temper
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January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can I say awesome and welcome back?
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January 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay! This is back!
And yay! Ron is getting some. :-D Good chapter, though I'd advise against too much Ron action. This is supposed to be a Harry/Parvati fic after all.
It'll be interesting to see if Harry's actions in the lake change much owing it to being Parvati down there and not Ron. We shall see. Perhaps in another two years?
And yay! Ron is getting some. :-D Good chapter, though I'd advise against too much Ron action. This is supposed to be a Harry/Parvati fic after all.
It'll be interesting to see if Harry's actions in the lake change much owing it to being Parvati down there and not Ron. We shall see. Perhaps in another two years?
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January 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for continuing this story. It has been a fun read, and I can't wait to see what you have planned.