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for Legacy of the Pendragons

by TCardan

schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmm i don't like these new students. but there must be something in the malfoy line that makes them act like that. the same thing charlie is looking for neh? so will harry "punish" draco and hermione? please say yes lol
person gweasley
schedule September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I feel a little bad for Harry, he wants one more year as a child but in reality he is no longer a child. He decided to take up the mantel of dark lord compleatly in order to win the war. What he needs to relise is that even if we regret doing something there is never a going back we can only go foward. It looks like he needs to learn that fast or I forsee problems with his mates espicaly with these new charicters in town.
schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it Love it Love it..... This is getting intrigue with this 3 new characters.. We want more!!!!! LOL
person Jennifer
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo!!!! no, no, no, no, no. You cannot stop there. Must continue! What happens with the guys from Fagaras and the Malfoys? This is getting very interesting :-) Anychance Charlie's going to enter the picture with Lucius and Narcissa romantically? Not sure it would be a good pairing, but I'd be interested in seeing what happens in Charlie's love life.
person PinkMartini
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg love love love it!!!
mmoooorrreeeeee
long time fan...glad your back!
person Snivelly
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! The suspense is already growing! I can't wait to learn more about what Charlie is up to, and also those strange new students. Haha! Luna looks like she's in for a fun year!

It's exciting to think that now Draco will finally have his own people, just like Harry has the Dark wizards and witches and Hermione has Marlston Village. Although, I have to admit, I feel a strangely jealous for Harry. I'm trying to tell myself it's because those boys were eyeing Draco a little too closely but if I'm being honest, it's because I like the idea of an all-powerful Harry a bit too much. A Harry to whom everyone bows. I'm quite selfish on Harry's behalf. :D

I'm also feeling a bit put out for Harry, considering Hermione and Draco had a tryst on the train but both of them denied Harry any loving. I think I must live through your Harry much more than your Hermione and Draco, though I love them all. I'm just anxiously awaiting some trio action!

Love the update! Can't wait for the next :)
person katiekrm
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Harry's becoming quite the bully. I was waiting for Ginny to hit him with a bat bogey hex after what he pulled with Blaise. It's one thing to follow the laws of the Dark Lord, it's another to bow and scrape at his feet and let him have free reign over you. He could have at least asked Blaise for permission to go into his mind. Hermione needs to hit him on the head like she did in the last movie when he was getting too full of himself. It seems like these three new guys are some sort of succubi maybe? They obviously see Draco as their leader. I always love your stuff and can't wait for more!
person Robs
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. I wonder what those 3 new guys are up to, and what Luna has to do with it? At least Harry is keeping en eye on them. Is what Charlie is looking at linked to them? I'm intrigued! Look forward to the next chapter!
schedule September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that you are continuing the story. I've read What a Witch Needs at least four times all the way through. I anxiously await the update.
person jamies_lady
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
fantastic start, I love what a witch wants and would love to see this on GE (where I normally read....please, please update soon