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for Legacy of the Pendragons

by TCardan

schedule October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeeeek those Romanians sound like trouble and poor Luna's already under their spell. I'm so pleased to see Charlie Weasley. I've always had a thing for him. Hope we see lots more of him (pretty please. )
person VampireDevil13
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cool. Please write more. I want to kno bout the Romanian students. What's going on with them, I mean, poor Luna! That was practically rape!! It was really mean to do that to her. I read what a witch needs, thought it was really good. Sexy and kinky mixed. Loved it. Bit hard to get used to Draco and harry but I loved it nonetheless. Is there gonna be more in this one? Please say there is!!
person Becky
schedule October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful so far and seems that it is going to be just as good as the original fiction, if not better. I cannot wait until the new chapter is added.
person Katie
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my stars! I have to say I loved What A Witch Needs! You are an excellent author and I enjoy reading your stories. I like the sequel you've started and cannot wait to read more!
person kajlima
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed reading 'What a witch need' very much. i expect the same fun and enjoyment in this new story.
So glad that you decide to continue it.

Draco seems to gain royalty. Looking at the title, i think this story will be about Draco a lot. I hope you give Harry the same proportion as Draco in this story. I like the three of them to be equal.
person kajlima
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh another thought!

Could you make the triad have sex in front of someone? Charlie or Ron as spectator maybe?
person Mdunlap
schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"He sat her on the sink edge, kicking the door shut with the (heal) heel of his shoe."

Nice to see you again.
person jamies_lady
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
panting and waiting for more..loved every word....
person Truly
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start to the story. I'm looking forward to how it plays out.

Thank you,

Truly
schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay...that was just mean.....i was so happy to see you do a sequel on this story....but you only posted 2 chapters *pouts*...well at least its better than nothing....i can't wait for more :)