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Heartbroken that this was never finished

Please please please please don't stop writing this story. I'm totally hooked.

Hello, how are you? Well I have to say that I've been reading all the story since What a witch needs, and it's so adictive and so great that I couldn't stop reading this. The Marlston, the triad, Harry being a dark lord, well it's so diferent that the truth is that I felt in love of the story. I love the twist that you made here in the case of having Merlyn frozen because he could destroy the world, and Snape obsessed in erasing the dark lords of the world, well I wanted to kick his ass hahaha. I really love the relationship between Draco/Hermione/Harry, I honestly love this triad. I love the village of the Marlston, and the pets (it has to be fun to have your own pet, I want one XD), although I wanted to know what happened with Kitty, is she alive? And all the smut, fluff, lemon, however you call it, well I love it. Now I want to read more, what is Charlie looking? Who are those Rumanian boys? And why they were watching at Draco? Aparently they saw something in him, at least Harry made his statement as a dark lord and a very jealous man. Well I already said it, but I want to read more, please continue the story, is really great, and fun, and beautiful, and very sexy. Thank you for giving us this awesome story. Well I'll see you around. And I want to apologize, first because I didn't know how to write a review here, and second because of my english. I am venezuelan and is difficult for me to write in english because I don't do it very often. Well, see you in your other stories. Have a nice week. 

XOXO 

Doris 

Are you alive?! I was so excited to see this sequel after reading what a witch needs. Only to be destroyed to realize it's unfinished and only two chapters! Please write more! I need it! 

Love,

an adoring fan

I hope that you have not given up on the second story I really liked the first story to this storyline