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for Somebody\'s Watching Me

by soldiersgirl0709

person cathn
schedule November 5, 2023 at 12:00 AM

They are both so hot!  I think Hermione is going to give Lucius a run for his money!  Thanks so much for sharing :)

person azulkan2
schedule October 21, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Great story. Love how Hermione took control. Have to laugh at Draco. Well done.

schedule November 26, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Loved this and Draco's reaction! 

schedule November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
For however long it takes!!! Ha! ha! I'd love to see a short epilogue giving us an idea of whether or not Draco had to learn to put up with Hermione for quite some time.
schedule July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Are you gonna add more to this cuz I think it would make one hell of a story :)
person Lizski
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Heehee. I always loves me some Lucius/Hermione smut! Thanks for the fun!
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!! Can't believe I forgot to get over here and read and review!! Adventurous sex is awesome, and who better than Lucius to be the one to inspire Hermione to greatness in the Minister's office! LOL

Love and hugs

Lady B*
person Meg
schedule September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I just love Draco's horror. :) Though I must admit I wouldn't mind seeing this continue on for a few chapters instead of only being a oneshot.
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say, this by far is the best Lumione one shot I've read....EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love a demanding Hermione and a nearly insatiable Lucius!!!! Draco being all whiny was awesome!!! Great job!!! Can't wait for the next story ya write!!!


Lady Serin
person alecto
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the orgasm scene in this was FANTASTIC. i just keep re reading it... it's the kind of scene that makes the reader twinge in their loin area... and that is a good thing.