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Oh come on Harry, just gather him into your loving tender arms. lol

::bows:: Thank you so much for that chapter. I hope that I get to read another one soon but you know what line just made me satisfied? Or at least content until next time...

Nuuuu! Lol You're killing me! Lmao Please get Draco's head out of his noble backside and make him a bit more selfish! Lol I think us and Harry could forgive a little selfishness lol. Oliver seems to be winning so effortlessly so far XD
Shigure-san
x chuu x

*growls* honestly harry is such an idiot for not even considering the dumb vow

Oh, my heart hurts for Draco. I want him to just scream in his frustration just moments before Harry leaves so Harry could hear and come back and make it all better. I love this story and how it's slowly but intensely building up.
And yeah Harry, while you're kissing Oliver you just keep reminding yourself how you don't need Draco. Yep. Sounds like a plan.

Um ... how to say this. When I began to read your story I felt it was really good. I mean - REALLY - good. You've got a great style, your writing is imaginative and creative. You write without errors, as far as I can tell. You chose a good theme and you gave our favourite pairing as original setting and circumstances as this very often repeated motive of soulmates allows. BUT! I'm not going to complain about the lack of Harry-Draco snogging, because I'm of those who certainly like the tension just before the realtionship fully develops, but ... yes, but ... you are repeating yourself. It lasts at least four chapters already. It's always: Harry comes to Draco. Draco can't say anything, so he says something cruel and drives Harry away. Harry feels guilty because of Oliver, realizes how great a guy Olli is and promises to himself never to do it again. And then it goes all over again. Different setting, different people around, but that's all. It's been what ... four times (maybe I'm exaggerating, I'm sorry if I am, but it really seems like an eternity before something new happens)? It's just ... coulnd't you make some progress already? If you don't want to take the final steps with Draco and Harry (or even Oliver and Harry, at this point I almost wish they would already sleep together :-D), just put in some other complications (like Draco finally snapping and moving away or somehthing) - that's something I would definitively appreciate (as I said before, I love the tension of not-yet-relationships), but, of course, I don't know about your other readers.

Good luck writing,
S.

GREAT GOOGLY MOOGLY I HATE MAGIC!!!!! well. obviously not really, but AAARRRRRRGH I HATE THE MAGIC THAT WONT LET DRACO FALL HAPPILY IN LURF WITH HARRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! *FANGIRL TORTURE*

i don t think i can stand that anymore.. now oliver even loves him, after 1 kiss... that means there is no way his heart isn t broken, IF there is at last an end to the back and forth... i hoped harry would break it up anyway, because he is honest to himself about his feelings for draco, what would mean, draco would be free of his vows. but I don t see that happening anymore. and is not the kind of story (with all the marriage around) in which they end up threesome. draco didn't even seem to catch the nearly love-declaration...
the story is great, but I am on a point were the back and forth starts to repeat itself, because they don t add new points to the struggle. it's always the vows and magick...
still, i'll read to the bitter end i know. and I'm deeply thankful for the regulary update.

ahhh so good! theres too much suspense. i want to kick both of those boys :P
but its so realistic in that sense. like, people are often this dumb with their relationships. so stubborn!

anddd carridwen is updated! :)

it is a bit torturous to "watch" Harry and Oliver kiss when I know Draco is supposed to be in Olli's place. Maybe I should start wearing silver and green and wave a little Draco flag as it seems like this is a game which is impossible for Draco to win. *GO DRACO!!*