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for Ten Steps

by Digitallace

person magentah
schedule November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I feel horrible for Draco, of course, but I honestly feel worse for Harry. He suspects that there's something going on--and has since been given ample evidence that there *is* something somehow concerning him and Draco that he doesn't know about--but doesn't have a clue. Or at least isn't quite ready to fully look at the clue. ;) At any rate, knowing you lack information that everyone else seems to be in on feels awful, and the guy's already a bit slow with this. I hope Hermione, etc, knock sense into Harry about quitting his career, especially given that he doesn't even love Oliver. So much to wrap up in so few chapters. Can't wait to see what happens next!
person PAccionate
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok, I really love the story and look twice a day for an update.
I'm really happy there is progress in the story now, that the pattern of harry coming on and draco turning him down is broken. but still i wonder... draco promised to show and explain him the magick... why doesn t he?
why did harry forget it? do you need more time so harry does realise, that he really wants draco more?
what i'm really happy about is, that they did have an argument and even more important, that olliver did ask him to quit, what harry clearly doesn't want to do.
it s a really interesting story, love the style and your ideas. it just has at some point got some streches.. but in the end even they add up to excitment...
hope to find another chap soon,
thanx for your writing
person sharingan.swirl
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I can't tell you how much this story pulls at my heart strings... You're brilliant! :) I love reading it in bulk though... seems to be more dramatic that way, I can really just drown in the story. So, I'll probably review again at the end of the story. :) Thank you for a lovely story!!
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is the first story where i like Ginny. It's not half bad liking her i guess ^_^
person miodrago
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhh you made me cry (:
thanks :D pls do update at the same speed or i might die hahaha.
xoxoxo
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man, hopefully all the angst ends soon. Thank you for the update.
person Luvdonite
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...making Harry quit? what the freaking hell? Olliver needs to get the boot and soon. and poor Draco needs to get his man.
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i won't say poor draco but why the frick doesn't he show harry already?
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The poor dears :(
I must say I was thrilled to see an update today!!!!!
THANK YOU SO MUCH BIRTHDAY GIRL-HAPPY BDAY
At twice a day I check my email to see if I have one
I postpone my life for your stories lol
I love them that much
I am hopelessly addicted to them
Support my habit pretty please????
Maybe later this week lol?
person Anon
schedule November 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You're such a tease! I thought you said there would be 21 chapters!? Oh well, i hate seeing a good story end. Then i'd have to find something else to read. (The seven Potter books for example) I look forward to seeing how you torment us readers in the next chapter.