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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kale,
you rrooooooooocked my world! more more more more more!! Is Sevvie going to become harry's nice master now? Was Vernon Harry's master? Did the Dursleys' sell Harry or was he kidnapped?? Does Harry have Stockholm Syndrome or is it something else?? o.o so many questions so little time lol. New chapter asap please???
you rrooooooooocked my world! more more more more more!! Is Sevvie going to become harry's nice master now? Was Vernon Harry's master? Did the Dursleys' sell Harry or was he kidnapped?? Does Harry have Stockholm Syndrome or is it something else?? o.o so many questions so little time lol. New chapter asap please???
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very promising start! Please continue!
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You simply have to continue this!
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!! I cant wait to read the next chapter!! its going to be great!! :)
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love Harry/Snape master/slave stories. But more so when Harry grew up as a slave like you've done. I cant wait to see where this is headed!!
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, already love this! Can't wait for more!
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter I hope you continue with the story
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An excellent beginning to your tale.
I've only one nit to pick, and that's a single sentence with very awkward construction. Instead of "The son of his tormentor
I've only one nit to pick, and that's a single sentence with very awkward construction. Instead of "The son of his tormentor
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very powerful start! I can't wait to read more!
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like where this story is headed. I'm looking forward to reading more, as you explore this interesting situation.
I wonder, how it is that Harry could not be recovered, when he was a child. I'm glad that you've put him in a redeemable spot though, with a softer Severus.
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I wonder, how it is that Harry could not be recovered, when he was a child. I'm glad that you've put him in a redeemable spot though, with a softer Severus.
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