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YESSSSS! You updated! At last!

Maybe Severus needs to give him a book to read. Can he read? I am anxious to find out who his master was. Hope you can update soon.

good story

Hy there!
please hurry up with writing...
can't wait to read more...
give me more...
pllllease...
it's really good so far...
no complains from this end...XD
hope to read from you soon...
yours sagotan

Interesting start!

Good Chapter

Interesting take on Harry being found. Good chapter!

Wow Harry is still so stubborn even as a slave

Severus certainly has his work cut out for himself. Perhaps a glamour to hide the scar, maybe something to change his eyes to blue or gray, and color his hair a warm brown. that should be enough to prevent immediate recognition since Harry acts nothing like his parents. Although I am having a hard time coming up with an acceptable excuse Severus could give Dumbledore besides him being some orphaned squib relative or something. But it's your story, i am intrigued to see where you go with it, so I'll just shut up and wait to see what you've got planned.

I LOVE IT!!! The Characters are well developed and so far the story line hasn't any holes....I am very much looking forward to reading more!! Please add me to your mailing list about updates - if you have one!