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Yes, I see exactly what you were worried about, there are people looking for fluff out there... and they won't be getting it any time soon.

This kind of thing needed to happen, because no matter what, to Draco she's still just a paid mistress. Hermione, as you made it clear, was finding it easy to forget who she was to him.

I actually found the wording in this chapter a bit difficult to read, particularly the part with Blaise; I had to read it multiple times, because I was a bit confused as to who went with what... if you follow my meaning. Also, there was an excessive amount of passive voice, when an alternative could have been preferable.

Anyway, I think you're doing really well with this, and I look forward to reading more (Maybe we'll get to see how the Weasleys are doing now, that'd be cool)!

Draco has really messed up now. I expected something like this to happen to her, her choices are few in that household and her protector is accustomed to NOT protecting. I love that she at least kept as much dignity as possible under the circumstances, and that she gave the earrings away. Does he understand that she has only ever been with him? Maybe that was his regret.

An excellent chapter, filled with emotion. My own heart started pounding when Hermione placed the earrings in Draco's hand and called him a pimp. Well done. Please update soon!

Fabulous chapter! Hermione sure is playing a dangerous game now. I can't help but wonder how it will turn out in the end. And I can't believe Draco shared her with Blaise! (Not that I'm complaining, it was hot! :P) And, I think Hermione was getting a bit big for her boots. I can't believe she's asked to leave! I have an inkling that he won't let her, but then again, that was part of their agreement wasn't it? EEEEEE, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Another excellent chapter! So Hermione finally got her wish, but didn't seem to enjoy it all that much. Draco is being woefully ignorant, I feel. I think I am too, actually; should I know the importance of the choker? Have I not being paying attention? I do like the fact that Draco is willing to defend Hermione though, even if she is just his whore. For the time being, at least. I think she's close to being discovered.

Christmas was wonderful, thank you! Since this was our first christmas in the new house, the family all came to us which was fun. Apart from my 2 (younger) cousins, who are both spoilt brats! And I'm back on the job hunt again LOL. I decided it wasn't really what I wanted to do, so I'm looking into doing a law degree now. Might happen xD.

Look forward to the next chapter!

gosh , i cannot even being to tell you how much i adore your story ! the plotline is pretty original and new to me as i've read alot of dramione fics out there lol. you're spelling and grammar is practically flawless which is definitely a selling point for fanfiction [tho my error-ful captilization and punctuation are mostly due to habit lolz]. i love how you make your chapters lengthy and always leaving the reader wanting more ! and i like how you stay true or close to hermione and draco's personality and how you describe things , simple yet imaginable . you're a wonderful writer &i'm anxiously awaiting for your next chapter :)

the angst is killing me....sigh

Oh wow... That's tough. Loved the updates!!!

Keep it coming! My curiosity is piqued. Maybe a tad more risque bedroom scenes would be interesting. Also, would like to see more of Theo and Blaise's nefarious plans for Draco and Jeanne.

New year new adventures........ Bring it on!