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Oh wow. That broke my heart and made my Saturday a good, almost-weepy Saturday. In the last scene though, I was almost afraid Hermione was rescued by Theo, rather than Draco.

Ui ui ui... Loved this chap!

Things I like about this story - the quirk of having all the "UN-" titles. I love a gimmick. Seeing the true effects of a war raging that turns a society up on it's head. Knowing the heartbreak of losing loved ones to the war and its ravaged effects. The way women/witches are treated in a society that is obviously male dominated and thinks of them as worthless creatures. They are so stupid! Knowing that Draco has a heart despite his so-called allegiance to the Dark Lord and the fact that he's smart enough to start questioning what he has done, what he ahs become, what he is now accountable for and the fact that even if he can't see it yet, he has a chance to redeem himself. At least, I hope he does. :) Waiting to see whether Theo and Blaise will betray Draco and if they're stupid enough to hurt Hermione/Jeanne to do it. And finally (for the time being) thinking how damn hot that scene was with Draco and Blaise together even though it hurt her so much afterward. But perhaps there was a little something extra in Draco's drink that night???? Either way, I thought it was very sexily done and Blaise was gentle with her, he didn't have to be and I'm glad he respected her (in a way). perhaps there is hope for him too, one never knows. :)

Things I don't like about this story - not a damn thing!!!!! Wonderfully written, thought out and expressed. Well done!!!!!

Wow! Just Wow! What an emotional rollercoaster.
I feel silly now.
You see when your story first went up and I saw the title, my first thought was it was being written by an illiterate person.
But today I wanted to read something new and brokedown and started your first chapter. I was hooked!
Then I looked up the word uncoffined..lol to my shame it is an actual word...lol Literally meaning not buried in a coffin. How simple! My goodness I felt like a dweeb...

then this last chapter, where Hermione tells Draco she wishes to leave. I can't wait for the next chapter now.
My favorite part of this last chapter was when she gave Blaise's gift to Draco as his pimp's share. Wow!

How disappointing that Draco gave into Blaise's suggestion! I suppose it's not entirely inappropriate given her position and the situation but if Draco wanted anything more with her this was not the way to go about it. At least this gave Hermione the chance to take two steps back and reevaluate the situation she's in and whether it is really worth it to give up her body in return for her family's well-being. And I'm glad Hermione was able to show that she still has her wits about her, during the dinner.

this chapter was unexpected....I truly didn't see it coming and my heart broke for Hermione yet also for Draco. He made a stupid choice and then to have it flung in her face as if she was a common tart...inexcusable. What now? What now that she wants to leave? Sigh....LOVE this story.

Oh this chapter just broke my heart! You put it together just right!

I don't have words for how mad I am with Draco. lol. I can't believe he did that! I wonder what happened in order to have that happen though. He really seemed not to want to share. Anyway, can't wait till the next chapter and again great story! :)

oh my goodness... this story is sooooo addictive. i find myself checking 2 or 3 times a day to see if u've posted another chapter!!!!
and this chapter... oh my... i like... i definatly didn't expect Draco to share her... with Blaise non the less... and her reaction... look, the whole scene was delectable and very tastefully done. it felt natural, like u weren't tryin to push the characters in a direction other then what u had already set up for them. i especially liked the scene where Blaise had given her the gift... i liked that u went thru her train of thought and then she gave the gift to Draco and made the Pimp comment. i felt and understood her conflicting emotions reconized the instant she choose to strengthen her resolve.... either way... Great Chapter... i've already read it twice and plan on doing it again. and oh yeah... HURRY UP AND POST AGAIN ALREADY!!!

WOW! I do not know where you go with Blaise and Draco sharing Hermione, but if the ends justify the need so be it! Hey I love triad especially with this 3.