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Oh my... Breathlessly waiting for the next installment. Hurry!

Oh, holy crap! I hope they don't kill him! He's actually one of the nicer ones.

aaaahaggahahahahah!!! noooooo cliffie, evil evil evil cliffie. *pouts* WHYYYYYYYYY???! post more post more!!!

yes Hermione cannot make him suffer anymore... she's a Gryffindor... and her sense of justice is too strong to keep the baby away, even if she's scared he might hate her.

Oh my Gods! what a cliffhanger!
I hope you are able to post again soon.

By the end of the chapter, my heart was racing.

YAY! they're together again!

Im dissapointed with Draco. I thought he really love Hermione. If he does he wouldnt share her with his friend. And he even got the nerve to tell her that she means more to him than just the money. He treated her like a common whore. On the other hand i am very proud of Hermione her. She has dignity and courage. I applaude her for leaving him. She made the right decision. Now i want to see how Draco will make up to her.

Great writing! As you can see im very much affected with your story.

I don't often feel compelled to review or rate stories anymore, and to be honest, I've passed this one a few times. I now realize how big of a mistake I've made. I do not really regret reading all that you have posted and leaving my homework and studying undone. Maybe there is a twinge of annoyance with myself for leaving it so, but I am for the most part left intrigued by your story. Your writing is very good and the plot is coming along nicely. This type of story is hard to do without being "hokey" about it. You have made me pity Malfoy's character, and you impressed upon the readers the complexity of the situations that the characters find themselves in. I really like that there is enough description and imagery to give me the idea of how things appear without being bogged down by so many words that I am not free to imagine certain things for myself. I suppose that I could have said all of this in far fewer words... but... EXCELLENT WORK!

The turns this story has taken are amazing. Now we see that Hermione has been just as affected by the relationship as Draco has been. I hope that Draco makes something better out of this second chance with Hermione. I want to also say that you write about the rising unrest from the masses very beautifully!

The story is going swimmingly ;) I can't wait to see what happens next!