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by LadyofClunn

person jaceni50
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great plot! Can't wait until the next update. :)
person Robs
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous chapter! So, it wasn't Draco she ran into then... it did slightly surprise me that he didn't recognise her. I wonder if she will go back the next time, or stay true to her word and be as far away as possible. Hmmm. Look forward to the next chapter!
person Sophie
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is actually genious, i've never read this idea before, i love when new stories with fresh ideas come up. Dracos my fav charactor and i love how you've made him have a softer side. Update soon, please!
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very scary for Hermione. I wonder what they will think at home, how they will guess at how she got money.
person Tootsie
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! ecellent story! keep go on, i like this story.
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was so hard to read and so hard on hermione. my heart broke for her and I was trembling in fear. how could Draco not recognize her? is he so jaded that he doesn't see goodness or innocence or anything remotely pure when its presented to him? he should wilt in the presence of her warmth for goodness sake. what will happen when she doesn't show I wonder? and does he feel guilty for taking something so personal from her.....ugh, bastard! sorry, great update.
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter! I was on the edge of my seat reading this. I truly felt Hermione's fear and desperation. I'm surprised that Draco couldn't recognize her after being around her for a while. When he finally realizes who she is, it's going to be fireworks. I'm happy to read that you've already finished the whole story. I'll be checking for updates constantly!! Great work!
person Insolence
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoah! Now, this was something COMPLETELY unexpected... I was almost put off by the title, but having run out of options decided to give you a spin anyway.

Boy, am I glad I did! LOL

I do have one complaint, though... weekly updates? *whimpers* I'll DIE of curiosity!
person coco
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, your response is enlightening! And now I understand the full extent of the story's summary. I enjoyed this chapter, reading about how D/Hr start out their relationship. You didn't drag it out. I'm glad to see that Hermione actually gets to go home safe... and now with a little more in tow than when she left home. Please update whenever you can- I'm becoming a fan :)
person misshoneywell
schedule September 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is the best story I have read in a very long time-- great premise and high quality grammar/writing style. I eagerly await another chapter.