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Oh wow, this must be awkward for Hermione... Loved!

Theo gave me the chills. I loved how you described Draco's family life. It was so moving and terribly sad. I could see it all play out before my eyes.

Hermione's decision shocked me. Can't wait for more.

you just made my day by uploading! i often check up just to see if you've updated. i cant wait to see what the future holds for "jeanne", i hope chp 6 is up soon :)

Thanks for updating!

There are a few errors, most of which I'm guessing came from uploading from Microsoft Word...
1. First sentence, you repeat "slipped into the guest room" twice in the same sentence.
2. There's an unnecessary comma "after, decimating" in the paragraph where Voldemort killed Narcissa
3. "without ever [giving revealing] a name or address to anyone..."
I mean no disrespect, I'm just trying to be helpful... hope that's alright.

And as far as the story: Draco thinking on his childhood was touchingly sweet, and how he chose life over his mother's dead body was very saddening.
Of course Hermione would spend two hours on a contract, I kind of tittered at that.
I hope she's careful of gaining weight, because it probably wouldn't take much to make him see her for who she is, and it'd be much more fun if it happened in the midst of an argument or something.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

yes, I do. :)

I LOVE your story! I read it twice over already... please update soon! I am dying to know what happens next!

Only one request.... more more more

wow these last two chaps have been great i am really looking forward to this story and i love the way that you are going with it... i like this draco i think that he has a lot of different sides to him that are going to be excellent to see.... great job

oh man this story is super awesome and I CAN'T wait for you to update!!
HURRY HURRY HURRY!!

Wow ! I loved your story and the way you write !
Can't wait for the next chapter ^^