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by LadyofClunn

schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As the dear Molly will say... the more the merrier... of course in this case about chapters, lol And hey at least you are good; my story cannot come out my head and funny everytime that I try to put it on paper it get more like a spagueti when you don't see the begining or the end... LOL! Keep them coming I hope that bunny bit you a lot in the future... Happy Holidays!
person paigeey07
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol, more please!! So wonderful!
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So excited that you updated!

This was handled very well. I love how completely honest she's being with him; it's gotta be disarming for him.
And I love how you've managed to make him almost sympathetic. Very nicely handled. Wonder what the gift will be...
person katiekrm
schedule December 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now I can't help but wonder if Draco realizes that he is the only man she has been with since she said she didn't need to be with anyone else due to his generosity and she was a virgin. You wrote that chapter so well with all of her memories of Ron floating through her mind. I loved her sleepy truth telling. It was a sweet scene. I think that gift of Draco's might backfire, though, since that's what you would do with a mistress, or at least in the muggle world. I look forward to more!
person Jen
schedule December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Was wondering if there was anymore to this story beyond chapter 5? I really like it and would love to read more. Please point me to the next chapter!
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh gosh i haaaaaaate waiting for new chapter to come out! And i hate waiting for all the answers to be revealed!! Like what in the hell was that red illegal potion that nippy gave her?! Or and i just incredibly thick and missed something??? lol. It was brilliant, as usual. Actually, it's really really starting to remind me of beauty and the beast! Could totally be a twist on that one. I'm excited to see more of Draco's character developement as he seems rather contradictory at the moment. Nice guy, but up to no good?? Raised well but by blood-prejudice murderers? MORE MORE MORE!
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Am enjoying your story. I can see why she would take up his offer, she's the kind of person who would think of others before her own sensibilities. Does she have some provisions for when she is discovered to alert Molly and Arthur? I would think it would be dangerous for them to show themselves at the op box if she had been discovered. Or is she so overwhelmed that she didn't think of it? You probably have it worked out, I'm just impatient with my questions.
person m.z
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING ...truly spectacular....i can't wait for the plot to heat up!!! and for their relationship to develop
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is so descriptive, speceially on the emotions that is simply wonderful. So, back to the computer we need more of this story.
person Michelle
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what happens next ;) I was delighted when I saw that you updated! Please update soon!

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