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by LadyofClunn

schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
With each new chapter I'm in danger of running out of (intelligible) compliments. So I'll just keep quiet like a good little girl, and maybe you'll update more often. ^_~
person FallenLeaf
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love your story! You really have a great style of writing. I love how you write and the set up of the story is awesome. I am so looking forward to reading more! I like your story so much!!!
person Anon
schedule December 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's good to see Malfoy developing some... empathy? He seems to be starting to care for her. It's still a tense, scary story, but at least there are glimpses of hope.
person smmz79
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow great chap i loved the process that you have hermione going through and i love that draco is being so open with his feelings about her.... i was wondering when he would be curious about that pepper in her cloak from their first visit... i wonder what her morning gift will be hmm??? great chap i am looking so forward to the next
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I agree, she seems to feel better :D Loved! Draco is really not just a taker. I wonder, if he becomes suspicious though, that she was so hungry... He must suppose that she got good money as a prostitute, at least enough for food, right???
person chocolatedoodle
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! ^_^ Usually I read fanfics fast because I can't wait to know what happens in a chapter, but I read yours slow - like something to savor :)

person Rosamund
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awesome, awesome update!
person Lynne
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope you don't mind, but I recommended you at the hp crack broom community at LJ!

You can see the rec here:
http://community. livejournal. com/crack_broom

This is turning out to be so awesome...I'm quite excited. :D Please update soon!
person magalena
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story, I had started reading it but then must have lost track. Re-discovered through a rec on LJ.
I wonder how long before he discovers that it is Hermione and what his reaction will be? Can't wait for your next update. :)
schedule December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh no! i hope you're still updating this! i think it's amazingly realistic and i can't wait to find out what happens next. MAJOR KUDOS. i would love to receive updates, so i plan to email you as soon as i'm done writing this. once again, fantastic!

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