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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay!
Well done, again, this is a realistic depiction of what could have happened, and how someone like Hermione would have had to behave in order to survive. It's sad and I can really see the scenes you're setting.
Don't be afraid about the next chapter, this is YOUR story; as long as nobody acts in a way that cannot be explained, then we can merely be grateful that you're sharing your story with us.
Well done, again, this is a realistic depiction of what could have happened, and how someone like Hermione would have had to behave in order to survive. It's sad and I can really see the scenes you're setting.
Don't be afraid about the next chapter, this is YOUR story; as long as nobody acts in a way that cannot be explained, then we can merely be grateful that you're sharing your story with us.
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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh really? I'd love to go to london one day. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too. Great chapter btw!!
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December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So I just read all the chapters today and I have to say that I'm loving it! I reallllyyy can't wait for you to update!!! So excited for more :) :) Keep up the good work! :D
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December 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'M BACK! Wow, those last 3 chapters were brilliant! From now on I am so keeping up with everything; catching up is taking such a long time! I was really expecting Hermione to go back to the warren, and for Draco to find some other way of getting her. Or she got brought in for stealing another vegetable or something. But I love the way it turned out. The way Theo made her decide to stay... and I think Draco is falling. Hard. I'm intrigued to find out how long it takes him to figure out who she really is. And how he reacts when he does. I'm hoping by then he'll be in too deep to let go.... Look forward to the next chapter!
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December 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This story is utterly delightful. I keep waiting for the moment when things will turn sour, but at the same time I keep hoping they won't.
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December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahh I forgot to review for the prev chapter so here are two reviews for you:
chap 6: The intimacy shown here as well as the innocence of "Jeanne" is just splendid, I think you've done a really wonderful job in portraying just how emotional and deep this is getting!
chap 7: The backstories for both Draco and Jeanne are really intricately done, I like how you have wonderful acts in which both of them are acting out in their own way as we can see both of them growing closer? I'm not sure but hopefully things get better, I wonder if Draco will eventually find out "Jeanne"s identity.
I'm sad you won't be updating until New Years, this is just too good of a read to have it on hold for so long! *Pouts*
Thanks for the wonderful update, have a wonderful holiday and new year and don't forget about us readers who will be waiting patiently when you have internet access again!! :)
-Enyo
chap 6: The intimacy shown here as well as the innocence of "Jeanne" is just splendid, I think you've done a really wonderful job in portraying just how emotional and deep this is getting!
chap 7: The backstories for both Draco and Jeanne are really intricately done, I like how you have wonderful acts in which both of them are acting out in their own way as we can see both of them growing closer? I'm not sure but hopefully things get better, I wonder if Draco will eventually find out "Jeanne"s identity.
I'm sad you won't be updating until New Years, this is just too good of a read to have it on hold for so long! *Pouts*
Thanks for the wonderful update, have a wonderful holiday and new year and don't forget about us readers who will be waiting patiently when you have internet access again!! :)
-Enyo
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December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
....WHY DO YOU WANT TO LEAVE ME?! *cries* :D I'm glad you are going out and about and exploring the world! Maybe it will give you some new inspirations for this or another story! I love the story, so very much! I hope you have fun! I don't think its winter there, so bring your sun tan lotion! If it is winter, bring some sweaters! :D I can't wait until after the New Year! Take lots of pictures!
~Chibi
~Chibi
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December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was simply wonderful. Merry Christmas!!!!!! And enjoy Germany we are going to miss you in the meantime..
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December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay!!!! I don't know, I'm in the central time zone. I look at the site every few hours so I know when everyone updates. *cough* no life *cough*. Great chap btw.can't wait til you update again. Merry Christmas and Happy New Yea, enjoy Germany!
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December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was gut-wrenching...he's clearly in love with her and she is falling for him. what a world they have built indeed?