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Let me have a guess... Harry's fantasies imply someone else taking control? I don't know what to make of it yet... but I think, controlled and professional as he is, his wish could be to give up self-control and be overwhelmed by emotions and pleasure... hmmm. This is really intriguing, you know.
But I really can't imagine how Keatson died. So far, nothing seems to make sense. Even if it was suicide, how did he commit it?
I wasn't sure if I'd like this story, but I really do.

Love this so much!!! very different, gripping, and thought provoking. I find myself mulling this possibilities over long after I turn off the computer.

about #6...

You know, if I was Harry I would need a drank! [not drink, drank!]
A Couple of them...this thing stepped into the Twilight Zone without
me noticing!!!

..and that's an off-handed compliment right there.

Plus, WHY do I get the spine-shivering feeling that Harry's fantasy
has to do with a certain past case mentioned in this chapter?

Okay, with all these freaky-looking people in Cory-B', I got one
question, where's the dog?

...and I'm sticking to my theory of....Draco is one card short of a
full deck.

Anyway, enough ramblings...

working sucks, I wish I was in love so I didn't feel like torching the place all the time

Excellent. Please update once more when you have the chance. *refreshes the page once more in search of an update*

Really nice. Harry isn't as far gone as to say revenge is his motivation (like in your vampire story), but I'm glad for Ron's support all the same. Keatson's desires were really interesting to me the way you painted him. As if he liked the thrill of women depending on him or being submissive to him so much that he would think that kind of power would lead him to be a target of assassinations? I dunno. Frankly I'm more suprised that we haven't covered his desires before this. For Harry to have to deal with a murder case that has a victim that repulses him is rather interesting. Great job on this chapter.

#5...

Okay, I don't know what it is, but Draco seems kind of dangerous to me
in an unstable way.

There's something about him, to me, that just signal flashing red lights.

Thanks for adding me! You've put out another great chapter! Can't wait to read more. The wheels are turning...I don't think Harry will resist much longer. ;)

Perhaps things are going to start heating up next chapter? I suppose I'll have to wait and find out. So Harry is a bit disgusted at himself? Making me curiouser and curiouser.

Wow! I really really like this fic! So glad that I stumbled upon it. :) It's different from all the other fics I've read (which is quite a feat, since there are so many fics out there). And it's well written! Yay for you! (and me, since it doesn't pain me to read it like some fics... lol). I can not wait to read more of this wonderful fic!