rate_review Reviews

Lovely. ^^ I felt so entirely happy for Draco here. I love how you described his reactions to Harry's choice. Great chapter.

Oh wow...that makes so much sense. Poor Harry...feeling undeserving of sin or pleasure or mistake of loss of control. What an interesting paradox, though...the fulfillment of Harry's fantasies is part of what makes up Draco's fantasies. And now i am oh-so-curious as to Harry's "darkest" fantasy.

Really amazing. That was really interesting to read, Harry seeing himself. I certainly didn't get the impression that his expressions were like that from the perspective we were reading. And I'm truly glad that Draco was there. Definitely my favorite chapter of this so far.

This chapter/fic is somewhat reminding me of Hamlet. lol. Well, in the sense that everyone thinks Harry is crazy but Harry himself, and Harry thinks it's everyone else that's crazy, but he starts thinking he's crazy...lol. I love it :)

hi, just wanted to review, say how much i still love your stories, and read all of them. i'd reply individually to each story, but that would take forever :)

i really liked the recent chapter 9, when it's revealed that harry's perception of reality was different than he thought. it's like christian bale's character in the machinist, where he thinks he's talking to a real person all this time, or doing this n that, then there's this moment of clarity where he realizes it was all in his mind. it's a more profound sense when the audience has been privy to the character's viewpoint and believes him/her, and they experience the same revelation moment as the character. i feel the exact same way about harry's ah-ha moment.

does this mean that draco isn't as crazy as harry seemed? or isn't crazy at all? harry's "delusion", for lack of a better word, has to be taken care of before draco's less serious craziness?

i'm really liking the descriptiveness of this story, and for your ever-present twists and turns. although you have a unique gift, can't help but be reminded of a certain author (hint, hint). please, keep it up!

I really love that Harry reacted like that so that he got so deeply involved in his own thoughts that Draco decided to unmask him. I'm not sure what else to say. Draco is scary intense and I'm adoring every second of that intensity. I think I'm more confused when Harry has insulted him and Draco backs away (like he's done previously in this story).

poor harry. im glad draco is there for him

Excellent job! So Dam HP finally broke eh? Thank you for updating once more.

about #8...

LMAFAO!!! Of all the things happening in this chapter, I gotta say,
''well, there's the dog!'' :-D

A greyhound?!? Why not a collie or afghan, I think an afghan would have
fit that section of CoryB'. They have the most beautiful golden fur. But,
then again, you're not too familiar with different breeds of dogs?

...and I don't care what you say, I think Draco is one bottle short
of a twelve pack. I think Harry should ...GET..AWAY.

PS: have you always been the user name you're using now and not anyone
else?

Hmmm. Thank you once more for this wonderful tale of tales....please update once more when the chance and inspiration appear.