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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it, its inspired and interesting, can't wait for more
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is such a prick, but I'm glad to see that he is making an effort to make amends with his son. Keep up the great work!
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad it's going sort of well. Poor Draco's face though, ow!
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've never really like to read Ron/Draco, But this story was very good. there were a few errors, but I got passed them. would love to read more.
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooooooh!
Dammit, why do you submit us to these cliffhangers?! *grin*
And, yuck, Ron. I already couldn't look at salad dressing without giggling and now... *sigh*.
Dammit, why do you submit us to these cliffhangers?! *grin*
And, yuck, Ron. I already couldn't look at salad dressing without giggling and now... *sigh*.
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Suspenceful. I hope Draco goes into a full verbal assault regarding his father.
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo, cliffhanger!
Good chapter, I have one tiny bugbear though. Ron's relationship with his parents isn't really a mother/father one, it's a mum/dad. Mother/Father really belongs to Draco in my mind. Just a tiny thing, though.
Good chapter, I have one tiny bugbear though. Ron's relationship with his parents isn't really a mother/father one, it's a mum/dad. Mother/Father really belongs to Draco in my mind. Just a tiny thing, though.
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you gave us a little more backstory. And we got to see Harry and Hermione. YAY! Poor Draco. That was so wrong of Lucius (but then, he's a total asshole, so it's not unexpected). Good for both of them. They're going to have their relationship despite what anyone else says. I think that Lucius is going to really try to fuck Draco's life up even more before they can be truly happy.
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow three chapters in one update. This story keeps getting better, finally someone says 'I love you'. Lucius is a real s**t, forcing his son into something he doesn't want to do. I hope Draco escapes his father's wrath and builds a happy life with Ron, I just hope the Weasely's accept the relationship. Can't wait for the next update.
By the way the sex scene was beautiful. I love it how Ron prepares Draco with both tease and care.
By the way the sex scene was beautiful. I love it how Ron prepares Draco with both tease and care.
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo! Two chapters in one shot!
Ron and Draco's coupling was just adorable. Your version of them is really very sweet. Also, I'm glad you posted an Author's Note regarding the background of your setting. It makes a lot more sense to see the characters this way without the looming presence of the "Dark Lord" reigning over them.
Keep up the great work!
Ron and Draco's coupling was just adorable. Your version of them is really very sweet. Also, I'm glad you posted an Author's Note regarding the background of your setting. It makes a lot more sense to see the characters this way without the looming presence of the "Dark Lord" reigning over them.
Keep up the great work!