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for Avenging Fire

by LadyZombie

schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I did enjoy the chapter. Sorry I can't be more specific. I'm suffering from the side-effects of my migraine meds. Great job as usual. And yeah, I don't really want to read a threesome fic with those three either. It is a squicktimonious thought.
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, I'm sorry your rating was lowered. Don't worry about it. On this site, it seems that if there is no PWP, some people are real jerks. Maybe if you had a threesome between Dumbles, Smythe, and Cornelius Fudge they would be satisfied. ;b

I liked the chapter and didn't feel like you had blown it off. Thanks for the update!
schedule September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what the trained psychologist makes of Snape's situation. He's obviously got at least some lingering neurosis from his childhood. Lovely chapter, and sorry about the amounts of gross you are producing. My allergies are manifesting as aches and fatigue. You have it much worse.

schedule September 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, good chapter. I enjoyed that Smythe was a little person. Not at all what I was expecting. Great job.
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So, Alexandria is finally settling in, and the Trio has decided to adopt the boy. (sorry benadryl is chasing names out of my head at the moment.) When will Snape come around and see that Helena is a woman? Or has he already, and thinks she's out of his league? Interesting thought, that.

I look forward to more.

schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
brilliant! I love it! the only problem is I was planning on writing a story with a similar premise. oh well, one off hte list, about 50 to go ;P
seriously, a good story, keep it up.
schedule August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love her ability! Who wouldn't want to throw fireballs when they were under pressure? I can't wait for the next chappie.
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so intrigued by this story. I hope that Snape is still around after the 'shadowy figures' aka Death Eaters see our heroine and her two charges.

Great job. Also, do you post your other fiction anywhere? If so, where? I would love to read it.

If you reply, you can reach me at tambrathegreat@gmail.com
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to see more. Thanks for writing it.