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by starstruck86

person Sheree
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm not behind a tapestry but I am waiting - unfortunately I'm not a vampire so I can't hold my breath.
But I'm really enjoying this story, please write again as soon as the mood hits you.

person Jaino
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm jumping for joy, a new story with Severus and Ron! I must say please do continue with this story as it
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Really, really love it. Continue soon please.
person Sev/Ron
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love how Ron is. He's usually a little annoying but this time he's pretty interesting.
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
>>Anyone in the corridor would have been horrified at the sudden outburst of language which was bellowed about the Potion Master
person abbi cee
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You continued! (does the dance of Snapey joy) I love the way Ron's thoughts play out as he thinks about his attraction to Snape. I guess Snape hasn't been a vampire very long, three years if I recall, and I would love to find out how that came about and who else knows. If Snape decides to take up Ron's invitation to meet him behind the tapestry how will they keep things hidden? Especially from Hermione who seems a bit too used to running Ron's life for him. Mind you, I expect Ron's been letting her get away with it all these years, so if he finds himself with a bossy Hermione trying to bring him under her thumb hell have to own up to his share of the blame. Can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
>>you will probably get three days of grace before I
person abbi cee
schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooohh... Vampire Snape. I love vampire Snape. Vampire Snape and Ron even better. Am I being incredibly selfish if I ask for more?
person Sheree
schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love these stories that just take a snapshot in time and give you a just a hint making you wonder how it started and where it is heading.

I know you said this was a one shot, but maybe we can come back here and play sometime - your VampireSeverus is quite mysterious.

I'm wondering just how much control Severus has -- and what eternity will be like with the two of them at each other's throats - LOL

I love your writing - especially the "conversations".
person kai
schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i want more in this universe!! vamp!snape, love it.
also, why snape/ron? just wondering. I don't mind ron with snape but then again I like ron with any male!slythrin just as long as its consensual. ^_^