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Finally got here and **Phew so worth the wait - I want to beat them both with a wet noodle - Ron for provoking him to such lengths (fool) and Severus for losing control - but in the same sense they both didn't know what they were getting into either - there is a connection here that goes beyond vampirism (word?), sex or addiction.

I'm wondering what kind of crafty thing you have thought up for us.

Magnificant as usual - and now we wait....

yes severus, prove him wrong!! can't wait for the next installment. You got me hanging on by a thread, i need to know what happens. but at least he's somewhat giving in. and poor ron, everyone is against him. so sad. can't wait for the rest.

Such desperation - will they or won't they - I need a daisy.
But I don't think Ron will be truly submissive if he's "forcing" Severus to drink from him and using that like a supplier to a drug addict.

I like the twist with Hermione - she is a bit witchy in your story -- but the family may be a hard sell since this relationship will go beyond gay.

Desperately waiting for more

Wow. I guess it's a good thing Molly hadn't booked the hall yet or that Howler could have been worse, though it's hard to see how. Does Hermione really want a man who has to be brow beaten into marriage with her? Doesn't she have some kind of pride? Well I'm glad Severus showed up and I sure hope he shows up at the Room of Requirement.

The beginning gives a new meaning to the expression 'fall for someone'. (And yes, I just made the worst pun of the hystory of bad puns, I should be ashamed of myself)

This was a very intense, emotionally-charged chapter. Severus is fighting against himself, and one can't win in those kind of battles. It's not only the need for the blood, but how he desires Ron and finds hismelf concerned by him. Which makes him feel disgusted with himself for corrupting a student, and 'molesting' him (not that Ron isn't more than willing), which in turn makes him deny himself. Which spikes the desire and the need for Ron to unbearable levels. It's a vicious circle. His behavious is clear proof of that - erratic.

Ron's decission to not go out with Hermione is an appropriate one, and not only because he is (or trying to be) with Severus, but because he already knows he would not be happy, and it wouldn't make Hermione happy in the end. They would only end up miserable. However, as things go, most people would take on the side of the rejected one. But rejecting someone, especially someone who is your friend, is not easy at all - but then people blame you for it, and you really can't understand why, and why are they butting their heads where they are not called for? I can get behind Ron's point of view about the situation.

I can't even imagine the shame that Ron felt at his mother's howler, and I found incredibly touching of Severus to go and try to comfort him.

And when you promise dirty talk, you deliver *dirty* talk. Dirtiest talk. The scene after the biting in that alcove is really hot, although Severus running away might have lowered a bit Ron's self-steem. At least he apologised, and answered Ron's questions, which is a big thing for him. And the kiss on the brow made me melt. *melt*

Finally, that myriad of details about the wizarding world: more vampire lore, and Disability Carpets! All those things you add that I adore.

I wait impatiently for the following chapter, which promises to be as emotionally charted as this one,

Davinci

You're amazing. That's some really fast updates.

Too short too short too short (but I'm not complaining - LOL)

Ron really needs to get a clue that this isn't all about sex - that his new sexual fetish is quite lethal - but the longer you stretch this the better I like it.

So looking forward to the next installment, please don't leave Ron shivering in the rain too long - teehee

Ah, the dance of Snapey Joy. It involves a lot of unrestrained hip rolling and pelvic thrusts punctuated with occaisional yells of Yes! Yes! Yes! I know. It doesn't sound a lot like our repressed Potion Master, but then the dance is usually performed by those who are more appreciative of the beloved PM. Back to reviewing. I felt a bit sorry for Hermione, but you know she is just a bit like Molly sometimes and Ron doesn't strike me as the type of guy who wants to sleep with his mother. Loved Ron standing up for what he wants and willing to argue with Snape for it. Loved even more Snape's jealousy when Hermione kissed Ron. And I really can't wait for the nex chapeter.

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yay, you continued!! love it. i like that it's ron again acting as the pursuer!! i hope he gets his man soon!! ^_^