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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know I don't normally like Snape/Ron but I was thinking it was about time for a change - and why not, I'm flexible? I was disappointed to see so little of this paring, and lets face it, half of these stories wouldn't be worth the read anyway. That's incredibly rude of me, but that's just the way it is, and I'm not dis-including my own stories from that statement. I was glad to find this one of yours among the 14 others. I was hoping to find something that I could stand to read past the first half of a chapter and you did not disappoint. Having Snape as a vampire was a wonder surprise [even if we all knew before hand from your A/Ns and things (are you shocked that someone actually reads those things? xD but I really do). Anyway, I just wanted to tell you that I'm enjoying this one immensely and I will be checking back for those further chapters. You said you feel unsure about the way things are going but don't. I think its just right and I agree that Snape wouldn't be anything but a dominate person. Please keep up the good work. I'll be cheering for you even if you can't hear it. ^-^
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September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hehehehehehe....i'm happy! go you with those awesome spells that Sev used on Ron. XDD
Also, you're right, I think you've been a little easy on them. It's only been problems between the two of them. Someone in the school needs to find out!! Muhahahahahaha....
also, something needs to be done with Hermione and Ron's family.
Also, you're right, I think you've been a little easy on them. It's only been problems between the two of them. Someone in the school needs to find out!! Muhahahahahaha....
also, something needs to be done with Hermione and Ron's family.
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
'Lost himself' - there is not doubt he has done that but I hope he doesn't truly.
And the "Yet." after Ron's thought of two mouths - did I read that wrong or do you have something more up your sleeve?
Again, I bow to your imagination and hope it never stops.
And the "Yet." after Ron's thought of two mouths - did I read that wrong or do you have something more up your sleeve?
Again, I bow to your imagination and hope it never stops.
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Ron & Harry are back together. Just because something is happening w/ Ron doesn't mean he can turn his back on his friends.
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Severus's conscience has loosened a bit the hold over his guilt, and that's a good thing, as he would have driven himself half-mad with it if it had continued, especially considering how their relation is deepening. By the way, just after Ron comments on how good it would be if Severus could duplicate himself, and Severus says 'yet'... Is that a big hint? Because, as you know, I have an hypeactive imagination, and the images I am coming up with are very interesting, to say the least.
And I love that neither of the two can steop thinking about the other for five minutes. No matter what they are doing, they are remembering, or fantasizing.
On the other hand, I am very glad that Ron and Harry have patched things up. They have gone through so much together, it would be a shame to let the friendship cool.
Severus's visit to Paris, however, is going to mark another big point in their relationship. First of all, they are not going to see each other, and although it has happened before, it wasn't because they were far away from each other, but for personal decision. Also, Severus is going to be around other vampires, which I, particularly, am waiting for, because we, till this moment, have no idea of who turned Severus, or if he is the same friend he is going to see.
And Severus giving Ron his t-shirt was so damned adorable (I'm sure Severus will deny that he is anything resembling 'adorable', but the gesture certainly was). And Ron knowing that Severus could (and did) cry because of the guilt over havng caused him pain was unexpected.
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And I love that neither of the two can steop thinking about the other for five minutes. No matter what they are doing, they are remembering, or fantasizing.
On the other hand, I am very glad that Ron and Harry have patched things up. They have gone through so much together, it would be a shame to let the friendship cool.
Severus's visit to Paris, however, is going to mark another big point in their relationship. First of all, they are not going to see each other, and although it has happened before, it wasn't because they were far away from each other, but for personal decision. Also, Severus is going to be around other vampires, which I, particularly, am waiting for, because we, till this moment, have no idea of who turned Severus, or if he is the same friend he is going to see.
And Severus giving Ron his t-shirt was so damned adorable (I'm sure Severus will deny that he is anything resembling 'adorable', but the gesture certainly was). And Ron knowing that Severus could (and did) cry because of the guilt over havng caused him pain was unexpected.
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now I have to wait for more? Glad you decided and had the mind to think out more of this one-shot. I truly am marvelling at how different these two are in this versus the other universe yet stayed true to who they are internally. I hope you may explain the lore that Severus was referencing cause I was alittle confused. Fire imp? Nice creation. Can't wait for more and seeing how you move this along. Now I truly have something to look forward to.
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so i expect about 6 or 7 more chaps of this! right on!! ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapter.
I loved it. I really like ron, he is one of my fave HP characters.
So now their bond together, now get on with the kinky stuff. XDDD
I loved it. I really like ron, he is one of my fave HP characters.
So now their bond together, now get on with the kinky stuff. XDDD
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my freakin holy hell! Vampire story!!!! Love stories about vampires but since I rarely read anything unless Ron is a main character, I've read very few of these. So thank you. Then add in Snape and having these two bickering each other and having hot sex is just tooooooo much. I love it. And you're writing as you post? Wow. Seriously I may become a stalker of yours. Where ever you post I'll be there reading. *dare I say even if Ron isn't in it?*
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*sits back stunned and slack-jawed*
I am trying to restart higher brain functions, but they seem to be in mass failure at the moment.
Severus has finally recognized that the pull towards Ron isn
I am trying to restart higher brain functions, but they seem to be in mass failure at the moment.
Severus has finally recognized that the pull towards Ron isn
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, drat. Somehow I logged in with an old address and I can't figure out how to get in to change it. I can't even figure out how to log out. Oh well. Review time. I'm wondering just who the submissive is here, because it sure doesn't seem to be Ron. Where does Snape go to meet other vampires? Is there like a club where they hang out and tell fangy stories over a pint or two? ;-) Someone had to teach Snape how to go on with his new life and I'll bet there are still some things he doesn't know. After all three years is a fairly short time in a vampire's life. Anyway I love how human Snape still is despite his non-human condition. And how tenacious Ron is.