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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have read many Harry Potter/ Anita Blake crossovers, but this is the first one like this. I enjoy reading the story,so far, and can hardly wait to see where you take it.
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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You and your friend did a great job at the prologue. It is easy to tell that you both put in a lot of work into this fic. I loved the letter bit. It was ingenius to use them to go through three years that way. Cut down on explaining things we already know. This is going to be a great fic. I can aready tell!
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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome. the letter's were a really good way to set up background without having tons of chapters leading up to the meat of the story. i was wondering if the whole chapter would be that way, but i was glad of the transition towards the end. very good, and i love the topic. abvh X hp rocks. can't wait for more.
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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
finally a fic like this that uses logic and a sense of time.... You still have a few kinks i think in one year you mention that harry is 14 and then you mention him the same age the next... to name an example. please write more
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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It was really well written and quite enjoyable, I would love for you to continue this. I will keep an eye out for more chapters.
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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story you got in the making here, hope to see more soon
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is amazing i mean i truly love this story and can't wait to see what you haqve planned next.
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The format of this story is very interesting! Cookies to you both for using letters as a way to tell the story! ^ ^ I also liked that you focused on the Traveler and Balthasar rather than Jean-Claude and Anita Blake whenever people do crossovers. It was interesting that you made Voldemort a vampire (insane, sane, who knows?) since that just adds to the intrigue. Well I hope you guys continue with this story because now I'm hooked into waiting for the next installment.
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love it
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! I can't wait to see where you take this!
Please update again soon.
Please update again soon.