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by margaritama

schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHO!!!! Another BLOODY BRILLIANT story by you!! It was Awesome!!! Great job!!!!!
person kazfeist
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad you put this here! I loved it on the other site. :D
person Coipje
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the story
I think Malfoy takes his revenge a bit far
But Ron was not nice either
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dark, yes, but I actually find that totally in character for Draco. Well written!
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow. that story was awsome. the way you made Draco the good/bad guy and Ron the wicked/bad guy was amazing. I was cheering for Draco even if he was underhanded. your story had me gripped from beginning to end. Well done!
person Anon
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have the touch of Midas, my dear, because I think everything you write is pure gold. :)

My that was dark, devilishly so, but it took in the very essence of being a Slytherin didn't it and for karma as such for what goes around comes around although I think Draco might have taken it a bit too far but then, that was the purpose of the story and Ron certainly wasn't any angel here either. How cool that Blaise got to be with Ginny and Pansy with Harry. Loved that Draco and indeed Hermione had the support of their loved ones to help bring them together and that sex scene - whew - STEAMY!!!! Loved it! :)