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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was an AWESOME story. It has the ability to be a long story, but you condensed it really well so it all flowed smoothly. There was less foreplay than I would have liked, but the conclusion really tied all the ends together nicely. Great job!
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness. when i first read this on GE, i absolutely fell in love with it and it's actually the fic that made me go read all the other challenge fics. I LOVE DRACO in this fic. he is so incredibly dark, sexy, and just HMMM. love it :)
you're amazing. please never stop writing :)
you're amazing. please never stop writing :)
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dang it, I finally got a chance to read this. Yay!
Yes this story was lovely and dark, but then I love dark Draco. You always manage to give your Draco this rather dangerous dark obsessive quality that I find deeply intriguing. On the surface he is all charm and refinement, but underneath he is a smoldering lava pit of revenge and control. Mwahahahaha
I think one of the more devious things is that he bound Hermione to him when he was making love to her without her even knowing it. He obviously has no intention of letting Hermione go. I love it!
As to the end, of course Draco is going to squash Ron like a bug. He
Yes this story was lovely and dark, but then I love dark Draco. You always manage to give your Draco this rather dangerous dark obsessive quality that I find deeply intriguing. On the surface he is all charm and refinement, but underneath he is a smoldering lava pit of revenge and control. Mwahahahaha
I think one of the more devious things is that he bound Hermione to him when he was making love to her without her even knowing it. He obviously has no intention of letting Hermione go. I love it!
As to the end, of course Draco is going to squash Ron like a bug. He
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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I was going to be lazy and not review, but then I noticed that over 1300 people had read it, but only 12 had bothered to review, and that's a shame. It's a dark fic, like the warning says, but it's still a good fic. I guess no one is as crazy as a Slytherin, they're just made to be crazy in that stalker-sociopath way. Thanks for sharing your story and I hope more people take note of the lack of reviews and leave you some love.
Jillian
I was going to be lazy and not review, but then I noticed that over 1300 people had read it, but only 12 had bothered to review, and that's a shame. It's a dark fic, like the warning says, but it's still a good fic. I guess no one is as crazy as a Slytherin, they're just made to be crazy in that stalker-sociopath way. Thanks for sharing your story and I hope more people take note of the lack of reviews and leave you some love.
Jillian
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August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, as always. I found this fic a bit disturbing. I mean, who was really worse in all this, Draco or Ron? Draco's kinda commiting homicide here, lol. Well, eventual manslaughter, at least. And all Ron really did wrong was harrass Draco and his mother and cheat on Hermione.
But I guess that was the whole point. Draco's just one sexy, devilishly evil beast of a man. mmmmmm, Draco.....Besides all that, what this really really really reminded me of was mobsters! Like the Sopranos, lol. Men who are deeply loyal and love their families very very much and they kind live a double life where all the evil murdering is kept on the down low :P Yup, Draco's definately the mob boss.
But I guess that was the whole point. Draco's just one sexy, devilishly evil beast of a man. mmmmmm, Draco.....Besides all that, what this really really really reminded me of was mobsters! Like the Sopranos, lol. Men who are deeply loyal and love their families very very much and they kind live a double life where all the evil murdering is kept on the down low :P Yup, Draco's definately the mob boss.
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was an amazing story! i loved the history you put in. good job!
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well dayum! You know how you should know you have a good story? I love love love goofy, silly, juvenile, Ron. I normally can't stand to see people turn him into a raving, maniac just to get Draco and Hermione together. But, giiiirrrrrlllllll, you did it! You wrote a FANTASTIC story where Ron got what he deserved AND I believed Draco honestly loved her, even though he worked quite manipulatively and methodically to get her. lol BRAVA!!!!!!
HG4eva
HG4eva
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG I LOOOOOOOOVED IT!!! HEHE! It was fantastic.
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August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Brilliant. A bit darker than your usual stuff, but brilliant all the same. I like the way it was a gradual thing, taking everything away from Ron slowly, almost so he didn't notice it was happening. Hermione was just the jewel in his crown. The straw that broke the camels back, as it were. It's nice that Hermione and Draco were happy together in the end though. Even if his reasons for pursuing her in the first place were a little selfish. Ron deserved what he got, but maybe in the end, Draco was taking it a bit too far. The Malfoy in him coming out, I suppose. Keep up the good work!
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited to see you had a new story--and this one was BRILLIANT!!!! You did an amazing job...it makes me love Draco even more. :) Great ending, great plot, overall great story.