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for The Establishment

by Roedhunt

schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow this is a really good fic.
I hope you update it soon.
person MistressTrill
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Enthralling, like most of your stories. Please update soon
schedule August 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so... very... HOT!!!
I have to admit that i would have preferred Snape there instead of Draco because honestly, he's a much better sadist and Draco's more of a cockwhore. just my opinion.
The way you write is perfect for this story. it wouldn't have been as good if you had described what was in the pensieve, or what exactly Harry's desires were right away. it's like every bit of info comes 'in good time'. the reader in me is pissed off that you do that but the writer in me applauds you.
can't WAIT for the next chapter!!
schedule August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hfkajdfhgvaus... Hell yeah! Harry's gonna have to give George one hell of a present for this info. So hot. I must admit I found it a little hard to follow with the rubber rings (like, why was it rubber and a separate metal bit?) but still very hot. MORE more... PLEASE
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*fans self*

Well that was cold shower worthy. Please update soon!

schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it update soon.