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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love the part where Hermione collapses, and Snape catches her. *soppy grin* It's going to be very interesting to see how the rebuilding of Hogwarts goes. I would love it if you could elaborate a little more... the scene where she brings the four wizards back to life is a very powerful idea... It makes me want more details. This is a great start and I can't wait to read more of what's coming. Back to work you go! ;o) *cracks whip*
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That's my girl! Out Dumbledore, free Snape and bring back Fred and Remus for the hell of it! I HATED it when Fred died, made me cry. I'd love to hear how Hogwarts was rebuilt, perfect chance for them to get to know each other without the stress of nearly getting killed every five minutes. I'm also absolutely slavering to learn how they explained the resurrections--they aren't going to be accused of making their own Horcruxes, are they? That would suck.
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It sounds like it's going to be interesting! Can't wait for more!
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awful
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting first chapters, I loved that Hermione told Ginny off, that was brilliant. I am very much looking forward to read more!
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ya! you're back and the song would be "The Cell Block Tango" The character to whom this murder is attributed is Annie although it is a group song and it is from "Chicago". I love Chicago both the musical and the movie but it really is one of those either you know or you don't... anyways great first and second chapter love the characterization of Ginny and please more soon
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story. Can't wait to see where it's going. My only advise is to don't rush. Take your time as the fun is in the getting there. It would be interesting to see the reaction of others on why those four. As Albus has already lived a full life, why not Tonks instead of Remus, why not a student instead of Severus, and why not an only child (like Cedric) instead of Fred who parents had so many children? It waits to be seen whether any of my questions have answers. You're doing great and I will certainly be following along.
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing beginning and I look forward to more soon. Thanks! HG4eva
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You've got my attention. Let's see where it goes.
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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great so far. I hope you bring Fred back as well as Severus. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!!!