rate_review Reviews

like this so far and hope for more. as for the others with scathing comments, suck it peeps at lest the author has the balls to have it print and improves with time like all writers

I hope this wasn't the first time he's spoken to her since that utterance. I mean she did have to get dressed? Surely, "oh God, I'm so sorry" can be said in the time it takes to throw on clothes. Lovely chapter, I think I like the idea of Draco and Hermione as pals. Is the song Edwyn Collins' "A Girl like You"?

Very nice way to turn the tables on him, wish I could do that. If he is going to start something, at least he'd better be aware she can finish it for him. I love your Draco, too, by the way, reminds me of several friends I have. More, please!

You are an evil woman for the cliffie...especially that kind! Oh, I can't wait to find out Severus's reaction to his being a jerk.

This story is fantastic. I can see why someone might be upset off the bat if they are cannon nazi-ish, as Hermione automatically gravitates as behaves very comfortable around someone with whom she has no previous intimate relationship. Thay may also have thought that you came off particularly harsh in regards to Ginny. But that's just tough tonails. They can go suck an egg as far as I'm concerned. It feels comfortable and beautiful to me. The negative review was rather childish, I agree.

I love their interaction. I love that he seems to gravitate just as much to her. I love your horrible little cliffhangers and your content and wording is just splendid to behold. I'm not particularly fond of the karaoke review a thon, but it's easily ignored. And I'm sure that many people who wouldn't normally review do do because you play with us. You deserve every single positive review you may garner. But you deserve them on merit and skill alone. IMO. You are gorgeous. Thank you for sharing your graceful talent.

~Mia

That's not my name, the tingtings
this is a really great story, but evil cliffhanger are just so...evil ;-)

Good on you Hermione! Walk out the door and never look back, you deserve better than this! If that idiot can't see a good thing when he has it, he deserves to loose it. There is no way to salvage this situation, he is doomed if he was awake, and just as doomed if he claims to have been dreaming, the insult of calling Hermione Lily can never be undone. Jackass, just when I had started to hum happily due to their wonderful progress, I could kick him where it hurt the most!!!!

Jeez, wrong name Snape. I'd be really ticked, bring a guy back from the dead and he calls out another's name. Is the song "That's not my Name " by the Ting Tings?

Lemon with artificial flavoring! Oh, poor Hermione, and Severus just made a major blunder. She has my sympathies about the aching back, though. I think I just figured out why this story is so different from all your others: the entire viewpoint is completely internal. The externals are not essential, so (consciously or not) they are largely excluded. It gives it a very unusual flavor, unusually intimate.

Brilliant, I am so glad Hermione managed to get her plans through; Children shouldn't be punished for their fathers sins, and though there are probably lots of those who deserves to spend the rest of their life in Azkaban, the Ministry would probably do a lot more good for their future by saving and giving redemption to those who deserves a seccond chance and can contribute in a good way to the wizarding worlds future. Having Lucius looking for dark items was a brilliant move, who can do the job better than one who knows the dark art as well as Lucius? Just as importantly; Lucius have a motivation in Narcissa and Draco to do a good job, he has someone to loose.
I am very much looking forward to read more!!!