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by MariaTeresaQuintanar

person Shellnet
schedule April 15, 2019 at 12:00 AM

 Great story a few loose ends that should have been cleared up the epilogue was more like a final Chapter it could use an epilogue where are you nearly clear up some loose ends like they have kids the girl in hermiones group finds her girlfriend ron and harry fall flat on thair faces triping down the stairs becas thay are ideots they both  attacked her so that would be just right you made ginn grow up and all and preg so she cant fall down the stairs her and nevals wedding more with the malfoys 

person meldz
schedule September 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OUCH
schedule March 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What a beautiful story! Loved the way it was written. Kept me pulled in the whole time. I definitely didn't see the end coming, but it was fantastic. Great job and thanks for sharing
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well that was just sad...for both of them. Seeing her become active to help those that were so vile to her shows who she really is.
Also, let me just say that those looking for "meaning" are reading in the wrong area. This is for the entertainment value and someone smart enough to be reading for lessons, should be smart enough to tell the difference in genres. Love your stories so far. p
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised that Hermione did not point out to him that if she could choose who came back, she would have chosen one or both of her own parents also. Just goes to show how much they are hurting after all they have endured AND how lost they feel with no discernable goal to keep them moving in a more positive direction. Story is great. p
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goddess! That was one of the cutest and sweetest endings to a story I have read in such a long time! I love your style in writing. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading your upcoming stories.
Blessed Be,
Sandra
person wiccan
schedule April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
To give credit where credit is due...'emer' did actually spell 'awful' correctly. So ergo, they must have a modicum of intellect(or a good dictionary). What 'emer' does lack is good taste and good sense and an appreciation of drama. I must admit that I loved your rebuttal almost as much as your story! You truly do have a wonderful way with words.
person Anon
schedule January 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just found your story and I think it was amazing and very well written. I have to say that I can't wait to read more stories from you.
person Kim
schedule January 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really amazing story. I can actually keep up with the plot without having to go back and I dont have to look at something and go, huh? Lol. Definately makes it a better read than some other stuff that I have read considering that Im reading this on my cell and it turns quotations into question marks and the letter k into the letter x. Keep up the great work.
person sarah thorn
schedule January 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i just finished reading this.. and it was wonderful.. shame on those who said it was awful.. it made me smile.. and made my day go so much better.. you are an amazing story crafter.. so keep up the good work.. i look forward to reading more..

sincerely,

sarah thorn,

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