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for Gift of the Unicorn

by Phantomhive

person milapink
schedule April 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story. Sev has not suffered enough?
I'm curious of the twins will be unicorn?
person Julie C
schedule May 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMFG WTF???!!! Snape is raped by a UNICORN and impregnated by a UNICORN! What have you been smoking? They kill men first of all and it's the dumbest idea for a fanfic I've ever heard. Not to mention your writing in general could use some serious work. Get off the drugs and whatever else you're on and grow a friggin' brain!!!
person Kibomi
schedule October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Not gonna lie I would have preferred this story so much more if Harry was the one given the gift ._.
schedule October 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please find some time to update this one! PLEASE!! TT-TT
person evanone
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked it so far. I wonder when will you update.
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait till you come back to this story I would love to see how it wroks out.
schedule January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I usually don't read things that aren't complete, but I really hope you have the time to update this soon. It is an excellent start.
xoxo,
kitkat
schedule December 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
cant wait for more!!!oreo.fanfiction@live.com
person Darkless
schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
An interedsting plot. And while you've changed our snarky potions master's looks, he seems to have retained his sour personality. Nicely done.

At the end of chapter 2, I was impressed with Harry's dig of 'measly job' comment, taking a jab at Severus' pride. He's right though, while Snape may be a master of his profession, he sucks mightily at teaching. He's let all his bitterness affect his attitude and probably his personal perfectionism color how he sees his 'dunderheaded' students, forgetting that he's a rarity and not the norm with his affinity for potions. He needs to coax a love for potions in his students, not bludgeon them over their collective heads with a cauldron. Sad to think of all the capable potions students he may have run off with his vitrolic teaching. It's true that while you may learn something, you may not be able to teach that same thing to others. I look forward to more of this story.
schedule July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awesome stroy and i can't wait to read the rest of it. ^_^