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um just wanted to point out that you have a lot of mistaken words. for instance in this sentence "coating the back of Harry's throat before trickling down his sarcophagus" you used the word sarcophagus, which is actually a type of coffin that was used by the ancient egyptians to burry their dead kigs and nobility (as well as anyone rich enough to pay for it), but i think you were going for esophogus which is another word for your throat. anyway, i have only read the first chapter so far~ i was a bit unsure of if i would like it or not, cuz i dont normally read fics for this pairing, but it wasnt bad. i am definitaly planing on reading more^.^
anyway, if u want to reply, my email address is dgraymansorrowinvoked@gmail.com

(haha, one of the two words i had to type to post this was 'Granger')

I really like this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I was wondering if you could email me when you update, pleeeeaaaasssseeee. I don't know if this review thing shows my email address so I'll leave it here. It is flaming_moondagger19872016@yahoo.com. I know it's long but I don't have to worry about someone else having one like it.

This is a hot story!! Can't wait to read more. Loved the ending of chap10. What in the world is Fawkes doing?? Obviously Dumbledore's work, but how MEAN!! Poor Hagrid and Snape are virgins and want to get the rocks off... I don't see how Hagrid becoming full giant can affect his alliegance to the light?? Dudley doesn't seem to be having problems, although they will get possesive of their mates and more aggressive, I don't see the harm in loosing their virginity to one another... And Harry is surely a cum whore lols!!I love everything about this story (especially the Dursley's ignorance of Dudley!! Mega sad, but believable.)

Keep writting!!
Sarah xx

I have always liked this story and was real happy that you updated. please update soon again

soooo need chapter 11!!!!!! why is dumbles keeping them apart?

what the hell! they've been together for 20 years and he wont let hi have sex! no wonder the giants wont go to the light, they'll all die a virgin. *sigh* dumbledore is a pain. harry should be the leader. he'd be fair. can't wait to read more.

For some reason I feel like killing Dumbledork! I mean how dare he say when and where Hagrid gets to lose his virginity! Oh I hope something painful happens to Dumbledork.

Please update chapter 11 soon ^_^

Jan

i am really intrigued by this story i love some of the ideas you have in here, i can't wait to read more :)

well, if that ain't just a kick in the balls. what a rude interruption.

lmao you are so evil. poor sev and hagrid...of course, poor harry for watching, though that's his own fault lol. keep up the good work, can't wait for more