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Oh no! Ginny and Hermione have been split up! Well, at least Pansy and Draco are happy; that should make things go a bit smoother. Light or dark Draco? How about something in-between?

I think a dark Malfoy is more seductive <;)
I like the story how Malfoy is so dominant

i like how the story is going. i saw that you ask how draco should be. personnally i don't want him to be dark but inlove with hermione.keep writing and i hope to see updates soon.

U should make this a dark Draco story. The stories with the light Draco arn't very good. I love ur story so far!!!! Keep up the good work! :)

MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE!!!!!!!! This is a fantastic start and i am excited for the next chapter!! I want to say dark Draco because lets face it bad is better!! ;-)

Can't he go inbetween? (in reference to dark or light Draco) Lol, interesting story. Hope you update soon.

Pro's- I love a good marriage law fic and forced bindings. You have the beginnings of a great story.

Con's- My head hurt at all of the incorrect word choices. As well as sentence structure.
In fact I wondered if english was not your primary language.

You would do well with getting a beta reader.

Another Pro. You have more guts then I have. I have the ideas for fics in my mind. but have not put pen to paper. [or fingertips to keyboard]

I am enjoying the fic from what i've read so far (with ignoring the improper grammar).

You question about whether Draco should be Dark or Light.
Could you be more specific?
I'd like a Hermione who is strong and able to dish out what Draco would give her.
So I wouldn't want to see an abused Hermione.

oh i love the beginning to this story! Makes for a great one really. Not some plotless dramione porn. Not that none of us mind it when it comes up a couple times in stories :P lol

Keep up the great work.. seriously :D

update update :]:]

Great start to your story. Just a note, in HP Ginny's real name is Ginevra, not Virginia, in case you want to make it HP compliant. But if you haven't read all the books (not knowing her name and all), this is a good start! ~Tem

There are several instances where you used 'hole' when you meant 'hall'. Harry and Luna are already together? Kewl. Luna's always been one of my favorite characters, and she's so easy to use however you want and you'll still stay pretty much true to cannon-Luna. I was wondering something, what if someone involved in this was gay? How would he or she feel about being partnered up in a heterosexual relationship?