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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Abuse isn't cool... possessiveness (to a certain extent) is always welcome, because in-character Hermione's definitely strong enough to handle it, and it makes for good fight scenes.
Glad you found a beta (-:
Glad you found a beta (-:
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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Not a fan of abusive Doms, although there have been some great stories that have pulled it off, and turned into my guilty pleasures. But, you asked for preferences. My opinion is that non-abusive obsessive, and definitely DOM Draco is of the very, very good.
Looking forward to what you have planned for the next chapters, no matter which way you decide to go.
Looking forward to what you have planned for the next chapters, no matter which way you decide to go.
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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, dayum! What a way to start a story. lol I personally am voting for the obsessive dom, as pain, abuse and degradation really aren't my thing. Looking forward to seeing his obsession become love and Hermione realize he's serious. lol Thanks hon! HG4eva
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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great chappy..go for obsessive.
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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think I would prefer a 'dedicated' Dom, one who is more cocnerned with her welfare than his power over her. that might be a bit much to ask of an obsessed teenage boy, though. Your story, do it your way. I do like this take on MLC, makes it interesting.
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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok. I'll beta your story.. Send the next chapter to Avivafae@aol.com. What's your first language by the way?
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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fairly inventive story; far too many typos.
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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay I loved the chapter
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August 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think it should be both a lil dark and lil light to even it out.
Idk i'll really into this story.
Idk i'll really into this story.
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August 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm thinking a dark Draco who learns very quickly that you can attract more flies with honey than with vinegar. I personally like both the rough and the tender sides of him.