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by elibdally

schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice concept. You've done a very nice job in setting the stage for an intricate and fascinating plot. As for whether Draco should be agressive or obbsessive, I think his personality leans a litttle closer to obbsessive. Personal opinion there though.

Keep up the good work.
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think an obsessive dom is the answer here, lol. Draco seems to really like her... a lot!!! I'd love to see him seduce her.
person jacqui
schedule August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Abusively obsessive. But a Dom either way. Can't wait!
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can beta your story for you if you would like. I work with a woman who is from Russia. My e-mail is obsidian_butterfly17@yahoo.com
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very interesting! I want a mixture of dark and light Draco! He must be devoted to Hermione only but with the usual arrogance! Please update soon!
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Is this a repeat? Didn't you already post 2?

PS: darkish, rakish, dommish yet in love Draco is always perfect - a little of both is perfect
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, my dear, if you are still in the market for a beta for this story, I am more than happy to do so for you.

I love this idea. Very nice idea. Can't wait for more.
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My email is gamma.orionis@hotmail.com. I just realized I forgot to give it to you.
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love it!!! update soon!!! ^_^
schedule August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i think an obsessive dom would make for a good story. Abusive dom meh not to fond of those.

Update soon! =]